poor ed

As I quite liked this story. I hope you continue writing stuff like this :)
-Devi

LMFAO that was so funny, I loved this chapter poor Al though he should have read the story first before reading it to Ed.

lol ed watching a soap? not tht would be hilarious 2 see:P

lol well atleast he didnt hear bed romance...XP

aw poor edward hahahah:P

lol al is so cute! why-light? was he trying to say twilight, and a boy looking 4 a stone? bet tht was harry potter the 1st book:P

lol i love edward

Uh...walking to get some fresh air

"And is that a problem?

I say, we POKE HIM WITH A STICK! Also, when I first saw Ed, I thought he was a girl (because of the braid) until I heard him talk. Then I was like, "oops". So, HOW ABOUT SOMEONE MISTAKES HIM FOR A GIRL? Weird time for caps. Oh well.

Well... Can I give you an idea?

We all know how Ed hates being called a shrimp, or any variation of short or slur on his height, so what if he was mistaken for a kid and given the kid's menu? I'm sure anyone could find a way to make that more interesting than what I just described... Anyway, I would be ecstatic if you kept going with this story! It's really good, and hilarious!

Alice

I cant help but laugh at the whole Lady Gaga parody and Ed being captured. It was just too much to be true *roflmao*.

Keep writing, and really loving this one!

warm hugs,

Silver Ocean Alchemist

LOL

XDD

I 3 her songs and all but you have to admit this is hilarious

XDD

update soon

:)

I for the longest time had no idea who this person was, and I stil don't. I havn't bothered with her music. This chapter was entertaining. :)

So I was wondering, "Is there really a singer named "Lady Haha"? And then there was "Joker Face" and then I was like, "That's like Poker Fa-Oh...-her- I hate her too." This was amusing.

hahahaa LOL XD great chapter cant wait for the next one XD