Brilliant idea and equally brilliant writing.

What a gem this story is! If Megatron ever had a mate, Nemesis is the perfect femme for him. She'll stand up to him verbally, but still, obviously is in love with him. It was interesting the..um...data input session. XD

I wonder if Nemesis can transform like Omega Supreme or is she just a ship like the Ark? It would really neat if Nemesis could transform and had the ability to shrink herself to regular Cybertronian size and back again if needed.

I also love this because it's an original idea as opposed to the overflow of Megatron x OC, Megatron x Mary Sue and/or slash/yaoi/yuri.

Very nice story! Brilliant characterization and plot. It makes sense and is only fair that the Decepticons would have a sentient ship as well as the Autobots. It's even more surprising that Megatron had found a romantic interest in Nemesis.

I found that to be rather refreshing as opposed to all of these Megatron x OC pairings.

Amazing story! :-)

PS. Is there a sequel planned for this? If not, then it was very pleasing to read this alone.

I never expected Megs to be cute and in-character at the same time. Great job!

Oooh, sexy. XD I like how you made Nemesis such a sensuous femme.

Very nice story here! You caught Megatron’s personality perfectly, a very difficult task to achieve considering how easy is to stereotype him. But you certainly know how to write him, and I applaud you for that.

I highly enjoy stories that focus in canon episodes and go further than the simple facts portrayed in TV. Due to the limited amount of time and respect for some age issues in the audience, the most juicy things were left out. And what can we fans do, but use our imagination?

Megatron’s reaction whilst wandering through his old battle ship was very believable, and in a way touching. I also liked his encounter with the main computer, both recognizing each other.

Certainly this computer has much more personality than ole Teletran. I cannot picture Optimus Prime passing his fingers through its console, but Megatron is entirely a different matter. He dictates his own behavior code; what he wants, he does, no morale or remorse admitted. And certainly his relationship with the Nemesis’ main computer was more than the simple mech-mindless machine thing. By addressing “her” with anger, he is recognizing the computer as sentient. Respect, perhaps, under his own terms.

Wow… Megatron must have really wonderful hands… in every sense of the word… eh… I’m drooling now…

Femmes can be very possessive. I can just imagine how big the obsession of a super advanced computer can be when the one she wants inside is the Decepticons Supreme Commander. Faithful, but demanding; strong, and yet delicate, that’s the kind of femme that Megatron would enjoy, no matter if she has no arms. Physical touch seems so meaningless when deeper bonds are involved.

Now I wonder if she is the real reason why Starscream wants so desperately to overthrow Megatron. Some privileges are only for the one at the top, definitely ;o)

Dear Lily-Li,

I hope that you read this, for unfortunately I have no other possibility of answering you.

First of all, thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it! Nice to hear the story worked out well :-)

I felt that Megatron needed a femme who is able to stand up to him - verbally, at least. Everything else I leave to your imagination ;-)

I also wanted a humorous ending for this story rather than the usual "pillow talk", and Frenzy and Starscream were kind enough to offer their help.

Unfortunately, my muse has provided me only with a oneshot - I'm not planning a sequel for this story. But sometimes, an unexpected plot bunny will jump out of a corner and demand that I continue the tale - so , who knows? ;-)

sphinx01

Oh gawd. Now I'm starting to wonder if BW Megs has a similar relationship with his not-so-vaguely female ship computer.

Anyway, where to begin heaping praise upon this fic? First off, you have a command of the English language that most native speakers never even acquire. Kudos for that alone. Then there's the sheer originality of the idea - it's a crack pairing if I ever saw one, but you make it so believable and enticing. You actually managed to make a *computer* sexy. That's really something. XD

And speaking of Miss Nemesis, I love her stubborn/sarcastic personality. The interactions between her and her "commander" are great, and the way she initiated the...ahem...data input sequence was really clever. Makes me wonder who's *really* in charge here. ;)

Finally, that little bit with Frenzy at the end was perfect. Starscream's comment made me laugh out loud. Please do continue this - it's too good to be left as a stand-alone.

One small mistake: "he was dimly aware that he was loosing control." "Loosing" should be "losing". :)

Wow, what a wonderfully original idea! And very, very well-written - I'd never have guessed English wasn't your native language from reading it.

Megatron wuvs his spaceship. :3

One thing I couldn't quite tell from the ending - do you plan on making this a multi-chapter fic, or is it strictly a one-shot?