| Reviews for Chocolate Scented Bubbles |
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phoebe.mayllenvillalba chapter 1 . 11/3/2013 iM DYING. THIS WAS SO CUTE. |
WinniUsagi chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 This was so cute! (: |
HalfAsleepWriter chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 Love it. |
BlackBeautyQueen33 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012 Hot! |
hamithehamister chapter 1 . 3/9/2011 Aaaaaw that was sooo cute! I love how dean dragged cas into the tub and didnt even worry about his clothes getting wet, he just said take them off lol XP Impatient much dean? Still good story :D |
101spacemonkey chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 damn it I need to stop taking showers and go back to baths! |
Shadow Cat17 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 Lovley! |
Chikan666 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009 I swear... XD You need help with you chocolate problem. *laughs* No, I'm just kidding. I actually thought that it was an interesting touch to the story. I want to go ahead and say, I was pleased that there was more.. 'sloshing' of the water in this bathtub!sex story than the last one. I sat there wondering... "Wouldn't the water kinda... slosh out of the bathtub?" Even though the water didn't over spill, there was more emphasis on it in this story, at least I thought so. P Hm... wet Castiel. HAH! The first thing that came to my mind, since we're kinda looking at Castiel as in relation to a cat... I see this cute/ugly damp, sopping wet, cat that look pitiful. XD The though makes me smile, and I'm sure it will for a long time to come. Anyways, on with Dean's cruel 'prank' of pulling Castiel into the bathtub. Well, it proves that Castiel is irresistible. _" It was a teasing/loving/playful touch to the story, to show that they can joke around with one another and everything still be honkey-dorey. When I made the comment of Castiel pouting, I didn't mean for you to take it out of your story. This is the second story that you haven't added that in, since I said something about the pouting. I know that there isn't any pouting, because I even did a word find just to make sure I didn't read over it. Now I feel like I'm depriving you of words. *cries* Dean seems... urgent with having Castiel right then and there. XD "Take off your clothes, Cas. I wanna f*ck you." My eyebrows raised at that one and I kinda just stopped to think... "That was kinda blunt." Which, is a lot like how Dean is, so it fits perfectly, just... d mn... it was really blunt. XD I love it! Another story where Dean has to leave the vicinity to retrieve the lube. The very fact that they have the lube, proves that they're expecting to have sex and some point in time, but it also shows that they're not horny rabbits that they need to carry lubrication on their person 24/7. I was fond of the position that you had Castiel in. I can only imagine, with all the sloshing of the water, that he probably got more water in his face than you had let on. OH! I forgot to mention, I liked how Dean sneezed and then there was the "God bless you" from thin air. The bell comment never gets old. XD It's just as funny as the first time. *laugh* I just didn't want to leave that out, and I'm too lazy to scroll up to add that in... _" Sue me! So anyways, Castiel's position was really hot and I like how they were sitting/laying/kneeling. That some how... makes it more intimate. I'm not sure how, but in my opinion it does. I like Dean's (your) description of Castiel in that position, "He looked hopeful, like a puppy wanting a treat." So now Castiel is a puppy? *shrug* I was always a cat person... P I think one of my most favorite sentences from this story was, "The angel rocked back onto Dean’ hips, moving against Dean even before the hunter started to f*ck into Castiel." It shows that Castiel is just as urgent as Dean to get on with the sexing. Which, in turn means that Castiel enjoys it, and it isn't just about giving Dean pleasure, because obviously Castiel is getting some goods too. Having Bobby call up to them with a 'grouchier voice than ever' kinda leads me to agree with Anne Midnight Hunter. I think that Bobby heard everything, and even though he isn't as used to it as Sam... I'm sure that he'll be understanding. Maybe not as understanding... but still, he would be happy for Dean. Ending with the promise of food is another reminder of a man's four basic 'food' groups: sex, food, sleep and booze. Even though there are a lot of men who don't drink, booze can be substituted for just about anything that a man will consume on a daily basis, besides food. "It was your fault my clothes got wet, Dean." That has to be my second most favorite line in this story. Yes... nothing is EVER Castiel's fault. He's an innocent angel. XD It's kinda funny to have him point out the blame on Dean. But you seem to come up with just about any excuse to 'humanize' Castiel's attire. I'm sure that he could have just zap-dry cleaned his clothes or something... unless this is... after he rebelled against Heaven... yeah.. probably. *shrug* If so, then I apologize. _" |
Anime-Romancer777 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 *giggles* oh! Gosh! Reading these just make me giggle and blush like crazy! I love how you describe Castiel's smile, how he grins with a cute sparkle and his eyes crinkle slightly with amusement, It's soo adorable! *sighs* you make their relationship so sweet. |
williewildcat chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 Got any room for one more? |
Anne Midnight Hunter chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 AW! Love it! Bubble baths...jujujujujuju! Poor Bobby, I bet he heard EVERYTHING HAHAHA! You gotta love the man! And Dean...The pervy hunter, Poor Cas, all wet because of him. lol Nice way to start my day, and Dean's lol Thax 4 writin! |