Reviews for Inviolate
Toafan chapter 24 . 5/22
The interface spoiler of reading this in 2020 instead of when it was released was a real mind screw. Despite that, it still had me going along before the reveal.

A wonderfully-executed specimen of the type. Well done, author.
holyscythe chapter 26 . 3/27
this last chapter is awesome i would like to read the adveture lex and mercy and eve, have going around the universes, that would be awesome and nice to read.
i am a old fan and i have jsut read all of this story your writing is perfect, and it was a joy to read it.
have a nice day from me.
have a great time writing and have great writing ides come to you easily.
:D
saske92ii chapter 26 . 3/12
That was awesome!
I'm suspicious as fuck of cassandra after she saved lex he was weirdly attached, her speech patern changer and we didn't see their sequence together, i bet she is the one who made the leak!
I loved the end by the way
Sorlian chapter 5 . 3/10
From the mouth of babes~
random person chapter 26 . 2/8
I don't read a lot of comic fanfic any more. I will say that Protagonist!Lex is kind of unusual and you've hit all the right notes. I can hear the late Powers Booth, who voiced the DCAU version of Lex, reciting all his lines. This was a better story than most one finds on the Pit of Voles. Thanks.
PappyOldGuy chapter 7 . 1/3
Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2019
6 yt?66 6
Athla chapter 26 . 10/21/2019
Gotta say, you've made me a lex luthor fan.
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 26 . 10/14/2019
A great story, thanks a lot. It had parts with a little too much tancion in too long time that made me tired of tansion and loosening it but overall it was very interesting.
OmegaUltima chapter 26 . 9/20/2019
A great read, though I kinda wish that there was a sequel, made up of Lex and Co's escapades through the multiverse, with occasional check-ins with their original home one; especially when they finally make it back; hell, they could have gone to Earth-Prime!

Ah well, I guess I'll just have to be happy with what you were able to give us; thank you for all your hard work!
Anime Nightwing39 chapter 1 . 9/6/2019
I haven’t read it yet is it good
Intragalactic chapter 26 . 8/13/2019
Thank you for the well-written story! I really appreciate the way it explains things (too many aliens on Earth, etc) that are otherwise just genre conventions.
ChaoticInscriber chapter 26 . 8/13/2019
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Endlessly traveling the multiverse is a lot more palatable when your entire world, the only parts that mattered in the end, are onboard and travelling with you. Nothing left in their original home matters that much, not compared to each other.
They'll make one hell of a homecoming someday, given how they "ended", with amazing stories to tell. Maybe they'll even run across some of the other teams of variably-willing multiversal travelers, which could be amusing. But all that really matters to our lovely trio, is our lovely trio, and they're doing just fine~!
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'Twas amazing, and I am delighted to have found this and chosen to try it out. A brilliant take on our Luthor Mastermind, one that highlights how epic he really is in a way that even some of his worst incarnations could have ended up following had the pieces to trigger it fallen just right.
He might often be Earth's Biggest D****b**, but he's also one of it's Greatest Minds, and finding out someone had messed with his head so early and often in his life? Even most of his worst selves would be Highly Offended and motivated to Save The Universe out of Spite for the ones who did it. He's still human, and still values freedom very highly, even when being a controlling jackass - he still has his own mental freedom, and generally speaking so does everyone else even if he's manipulating them through propaganda like a maestro. Killing people is one thing, using and manipulating and even torturing is acceptable when it yields useful results, but mind-control I think is one thing he disapproves of heavily long-term. (Excepting when he's legit batshit out of his mind, which even he usually later regrets the choices and disgusts himself with some of the sloppy work he did while Loco enough.) Occasionally briefly useful, Displeasing in the highest when too widespread and too long-lasting.
ChaoticInscriber chapter 8 . 8/11/2019
*delighted cackling*
Of all of the people who could have found out about the massive conspiracy, Lex-Luthor-recently-detoxed was probably the worst case scenario~! Others might be incredibly dangerous to the population in their reactions, or purely self-destructive, but Lex is the one person who could actually pull off a full scale war on whoever is responsible, correctly hunt them down, and i/win/i.
I love it when he wields his brain properly to be more than a cartoonishly cranky supervillain. He's utterly brilliant in his own right, thoroughly out-snarking and out-sassing the Big Blue Boyscout should be a default mode for him. Twist his head up in knots trying to figure out if he's been insulted, complimented, or just plain dissed, all the while coming up roses to any witnesses, like say news cameras? XD Lex is a science genius and a multi-millionaire businessman on his own merits. Words as weapons should already be old hat to him by now. 3
Seeing him like this is a big part of the reason I actually quite like him as a character so much. I'm glad to have found this excellent example of Lex Luthor Epicness~!
MBurris chapter 4 . 4/10/2019
Brilliant, chilling, captivating ... and I can hear it all in my head as a long series of episodes from the Justice League.

Bravo! Fantastic!
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