| Reviews for Butterflies and Chaos |
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Elle Ryder chapter 5 . 2/25/2019 When Ginny had noticed the herb her grandmother had told her not to touch added to the tea her mother was trying to get her to consume for a moment i almost started yelling at her to call for her grandmother or scream and i felt if just for a second i was at the movies yelling at the screen lol Ik it’s been 5 years since you last updated but i hope you will again coz this is a pretty good story |
indanthrene-gecko chapter 4 . 6/20/2017 Was rereading stories I had put on my alerts list. This is one of my favorites. I've always thought Septimus and Cedrella Weasley were interesting characters. I hope you can redo your outline, because this story has potential. What's with Moody? Was he Cedrella's ex-boyfriend or something? Him and Cedrella have animosity, but he was concerned for Ginny in the last chapter. Will he be on their side eventually? I know this is way later into the story, but will Dumbledore allow Ginny to come to Hogwarts? You could have him fuss over a potential dark witch corrupting other young minds or some rubbish. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2017 Interesting premise...one thing to keep in mind is that until Ginny can control herself, she IS a danger to her family...and the "cuffs" were a condition of parole...without them, she would not have been sent home. |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 4 . 3/15/2016 As you haven't updated since my last review I've really just one thing to say (write): There are still people out here, waiting ... ;-) Really, this is just too good to be abandoned. |
hollyheadharper chapter 5 . 10/1/2015 Ginny is such a sweetheart sfnvlwkcjzm I really hope this gets updated soon! |
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 5/21/2015 Is this story dead, or just on hiatus? |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/10/2015 I dislike the predeterminism and the harsh division between Light and Dark. But this is one of the better stories that I read here. I hope that you write something again, this story or another. |
Imraphel chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 An original and well-written story. It's rare to see anyone write sympathetically about dark magic vs light magic. I look forward to seeing where this one goes. |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 5 . 1/26/2015 Sad if this fic isn't finished! It's very beautiful and a new and very interesting angle on some of the persons - really intriguing! Så please come back and update! |
Jem Doe chapter 5 . 1/3/2015 Your story has an interesting idea and take. I hope you update it soon! |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 5 . 12/25/2014 Too bad if this beautiful story is abandoned! It's a (to me) totally new and surprising angle, but it comes so naturally that one may wonder why on earth no one has thought about it before? This investigation of the true nature of the other, socalled "dark", side must go on! I will ask you to keep writing primarily because your tale is so wonderful written, but also because it represents a very interesting road into new and uncharted land in the "potterverse". |
ptl4ever419 chapter 5 . 8/30/2014 Love it :D amazing and unique story |
indanthrene-gecko chapter 5 . 6/17/2014 So is the Dark vs Light why Harry couldn't crucio Bellatrix in canon? Can Gred and Forge use dark magic? |
Rago Dragovian chapter 5 . 5/28/2014 Interesting story. I look forward to more. It definitely seems believable enough and your view of Dark Magic as music is an interesting one. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2013 Nicely written and unique story...very compelling and yet hard to find... I do have a few issues to raise though...One of them is given the way the aurors react to Ginny, it isn't a simple matter of prejudice that is driving her parents, but rather fear of losing their daughter...The authorities disabled her and treated her as a real threat prior to her parents arrival...it seems to be to be analogous to having a bipolar child and having to figure out how to both protect society and the child, and not have them locked up forever... Also, I doubt that Molly would simply abandon her favorite child so readily, it goes against all we have been told of her nature as both "mother bear" and Ginny being her favorite...as the only daughter and baby of the family. Harry's magic was definitly a bit "dark"...yet they didn't abandon him... Also, Sirus listed Molly as a cousin, not Arthur, so she must have ties to the Black's... |