MY FAVORITE PART OF THIS STORY IS THE AUTHOR'S NOTE! :D

Awww! That was so cute!

Nice, sweet, and kind of suprising. I like it! :D

XD I loved that. Alvin's going along with Theodore excuse of tying his laces is what threw me off. I was like, wait what? If Alvin believes it then is that how he really got the black eye?

But then Alvin's confrontation after Eleanor left was very thoughtful of him. I liked the way he was portrayed, as a really nice older brother.

And Theodore getting into fights? Wow, never thought I'd see the day. His loyalty was adorable to me.

Best line was after Alvin asked, "What kind of things?" I loved Theo's response of "NC-17 rated things."

So from the way things ended I can only assume that Eleanor either didn't really have feelings for Alvin like Theo thought or she started to have feelings for Theo after he told the story. It was a cute and well-placed ending.

xoxo

Very cute!

Theodore and Elanore are my fav chipmunk couple!

I wish you could write more of this!

very Good

i very much love this story its cute. sweet

Loved it! Great job writing Theo & Ellie! Hope you have an awesome Thursday! :]

~Girl4Christ15

What a cute one-shot, I liked that part at the beginning where Ellie puts a bag of frozen peas on Theo's eye. I liked that story Theo made up about his shoelaces, that is so Theo!

I liked the interaction between Alvie and Theo, when Alvie got Theo to reveal the truth. Turns out Theo was sticking up for Ellie when some of his schoolmates were making not-nice comments about Ellie. You don't expect Theo to be a fighter, but I was glad that he went to bat for Ellie.

I loved that bit at the end when Theo told Ellie the truth and they became a couple. I also liked that allusion to those teachers on the Charlie Brown specials (whuh, whuh).

This story was really cute, I can imagine this being an AATC eppie.

That was so adorable! I loved how Alvin knew his reason for the black eye wasn't honest. And I loved his reason for getting it, Teddy is so sweet! Ellie is lucky to have him!

OMG Soo cute3

I love theo and ellie but no one really does that!

so cute3

totally good:)

i thougtht u got it from sponge bob:)

lol

Great3

Omg... when theodore said It sucks that she loves you(Alvin) I felt so bad for him! He's to much of a sweetie- I can't stand it when he's sad and upset. But I'm glad that Eleanor got to hear the truth. There so cute. Good job.

This was very good!

I loved it xD

Theo was so cute in it x]

And I love how.. "understanding" Alvin was xP

Lmfao.

Very cute :]

Write again soon!

This is actually a good story. Usually stories so short capture my attention for a second, but i like this. kinda wish there was more, but that wouldn't fit this story