Beautiful!

Awwww...that made me wan to cry because it was so amazing!good job! Keep it up!

So cute~ I was listening to Vanilla Twilight while reading this sniff sopretty:')

wow. :O so moving...

Beautiful

Never heard of this song, I don't think it's popular from where I live. Actually, it's hard to find songs that are perfect for this couple these days but what gave you the idea of writing your own song fanfictions? Did you read one of mine, perhaps a few or went on a different section or website to read them? I'm not a fan of Luigi x Daisy since it's not my favourite couple and neither of them are my favourite characters but I sorta felt like writing one about them. I've already written a lot of them about Count Bleck/Count or Lord Blumiere x Tippi/Lady Timpani, one about Mario x Rosalina (one-sided, Rosalina has secret feelings for him) and another one on the way about another favourite couple of mine from the Mario games.

Nice, short and sweet romantic song fanfiction with a little depressing vibe to it. Would have been a little better if it was slightly longer but oh well... ; Beautiful and charming description about their romantic moments but would have been much nicer if there was more to show how much Luigi misses Daisy and longs for her company.