Ahhh, that happily unexpected Squinoa warmed my heart! Haha, I think what I find most interesting about Dissidia 1 is how 12 was actually the prequel to this and it's just so fascinating how the game's order shifts from Cloud wanting to protect Tifa (12) to having forgotten her due to the cycles and wanting to remember her (Zack and Aerith as well, IIRC).

You captured those aspects beautifully here, even though this was a fic written when Dissidia 1 was the only game in that series. Wonderful job!

Beautiful

Oooh, steamy, you have quite a hook in the beginning an a knack for erotica. What I would recommend though is to break up these big chunks of narrative text, the big paragraphs tend to intimidate some readers. A trick I do is take 2 sentences and find ways to combine them into one, that cuts my paragraph in half and ultimately tightens everything up.

Good job :)

loved it

That was soooooooooooooo beautiful! :{ Thank you!

Okay, I'm sometimes annoyed by the CloTi marriage or pregnancy things but this one is just...awwwwwwhwhhhh! It's so sweet and adorable and I absolutely loved it[:

OH MY GOSH! *O* this was lovely! *O* I've been looking everywhere for this fics ever since SE launched the new Dissidia 012 trailers x3 great job ;) I loved it!

I love this story. It's very interesting and I love to think that this will be the ending for Cloud at Dissidia. Great job, you wrote this well. Definitely one of my favorites.

Oh I love this I was watching the clips on line and wondering way people don't mention this in fan fiction! and here you are!

:D you are an awesome possum... haha. more! a squallxrinoa like this would be nice :) dissidia fics are too much yaoi ugh. im not a fan of buttsecks. or terra gang bang O.o dear cosmos, spare me...

Out of all the Final Fantasy games, seven is my favorite. I wish they would remake the game. They would make a huge load of money off of it. From what I heard now, Square is posting a petition or something on their website asking how many people want it. I don't why they bother since the game is rated as one of the greatest games of all time and has millions of fans everywhere

Aww! So cute! I love the part at the end, and I especially love the conversation between Cloud and Squall. Have you thought about possibly writing a companion fic to this, featuring our favorite "lone wolf" SeeD? XD Great story, and it's definitely going on my favorites list. Thanks for an excellent read!

Oh, I've read this one in Livejournal. And I just had to reread it again here.

I find this story very relaxing and beautiful. You've played out the thoughts and emotions so well. It's so like Cloud to be like that. He was totally in-character here. I admire that.

Great job.

WAH! I can't believe I just read this now! Sorry!

Anyway, I never played Dissidia, but I thought this was very beautiful and moving... I especially love the part where Squall and Cloud are talking! I'm a sucker for both FF7 and 8, and I love it when their stories mesh! BWAHAHA!

And I'm pretty sure that even though Cloud forgets about Tifa, his heart will still remember her, and they'll always find their way back to each other... *sigh, hopeless romantic mode*

Fantastic work, as is to be expected from you! And as usual, you managed to pry me away from studying! Anyway, heading back to the books again! Just wanted to say well done!

Well damn...now I really want to go and play Dissidia...

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Their sales dept. should thank you for being awesome, I certainly am.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.