Reviews for Magic
Kyonomiko chapter 1 . 2/7/2019
Adorable piece
Kat chapter 1 . 12/14/2018
Awwww this is cute!
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
Awwww
purplepam chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Awww! Adorable! I love it ! Great job!
elizaka chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Lovely!
dramionelove chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
this story has a great potential to be continued into a full length one!
agirlsufferingwritersblock chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
aw, how cute.

"He's a daddy." - HA! love that line.
Ivyxxx chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Loved it. no other words really fit other then the simple "loved it"
HumanBeing235 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Honestly, quite pointless, but who said pointless is bad? huhu! (new pc laughter by mua)
Imane Nikko chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Three for three. It's diabolical. You must continue one of these. That little "complete" up at the top just mocks me.

I found one typo... it should be "It's really not worth YOUR time" not "you're"... but otherwise this is pretty perfect.
voldyismyfather chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
grr the ferret love it xx
NiyuChu chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Now /that's/ what I call a story.

An especially good story. That was an awesome end line :D I can't write endings for my life.

Which is why I can't end this review, because I suck at end lines.

I know what real magic is :D

Your writing! (cheesy, but, you know, I'm trying!)
ValSilph chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Oh, this was too perfect for words! :D Loved it, made me smile.
dracoxhermione322 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
i like it :)
Michelle Black a.k.a Elle chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
very interesting. Loved it. Are you gonna add another chapter to this or leave it like that?
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