I read this story years ago and forgot its name. I'm so glad I found it again, it's wonderful

Nice story! I love the way you show the main storyline from the eyes of an outsider, and the relationships between Hyuuga clan members. Your Hanabi is great. This is my new headcannon.

Great study of Hanabi. It was so interesting to see the Hyuuga through her eyes. You did an excellent job of sticking to her point of view.

Very interesting story. I liked it.

Good work!

My God, this was gorgeous. I am a HUGE Neji/Hina fan - but what stood out about this story was Hanabi - her relationships, her wants - everything about her was brilliantly presented. I do hope she said 'yes'.

Thank you for sharing!

I love your take on Hanabi. Your prose is just too beautiful. 3

Nice story! I like how angsty Hanabi goes through her puberty and how Ko ended up giving his shoulders for her to cry on. But it was surprising that it ended as KoHana when I'd thought of Konohamaru!

Neji and Hinata were sweet as usual, and I kinda like jealous Hanabi. It seems she really love her sister to feel that kind of jealousy for her attention! *laughs*

Anyways, I didn't Ko was that young coz he look somewhat closer to Kakashi's age...

it was until the last scene that i fully understand what you're trying to convey. i am really impressed with the way you compose the story and the scene, discussing the issue at hand - spiralling between love, social position, family and the abominable seal.

at first i was kinda lost as to why you keep on emphazing on the bandaged cloth of her great auntie on her wedding day. the way you taunt readers is very entertaining. it wasn't until the marriage proposal that i finally understand everything. the way you made the comparison between the social status in between the seemingly normal and harmless 2 sister, it was endearing. deep and i really enjoy reading this piece of work.

no words could express how amazing i found this fic is. it moved me, and it makes people thinks out of the box, out of their comfort zone. you're very talented, and there's nothing else that i could do to honor this wonderful composition but to add it to my fav.

thank you.

shourin

peaceful. :D I like it.

Not many writers portray Hanabi as anything but self-preserving and insolent (to be kind). But, you've given her depth and rounded out those harsh edges. And, although I'm a Hina fan, you've allowed me to see a little sister's point of view and experience her insecurities. I really enjoyed this fic. :D

I love this story! It's just so sweetXD Is this the end?

good story. sad to see what could become of hinata. as happy as she can be though.

I love this story. Its too bad Hanabi doesn't get this much focus in the actual show than in fandom.