I really enjoyed this at the line when Josh says he doesn't have a life something cracked inside 's just fantastic work.

I really like this story. I've always wanted Joshua to reply "I'll be there" to Neku. That's why when I read that line in this story I just felt so happy!

It's nice seeing just a normal Neku and Josh friendship fic! It's so hard to find one on this site.

Anyway, I loved how Joshua was stalking Neku. I can totally see him doing that. I'm pretty sure he did it during week 1 of the game anyway, so it just makes it even more in character.

I enjoyed reading this!

Finally, a yaoi free Josh and neku that stay in character!

It was cute! I really want to draw a Joshy kitty now X3

It was a fun read and well written.

Aww, I liked your story, it was cute! Neku and Joshua are in character, and Joshua /would/ stalk Neku, Heheh...

-NarratoreMelon

haha, I logged on just to leave a review for you

This is a cute story D

I would love to read a chapter fic written by you.

Write some more please~

Now that's more like it!

Friends, the way it should be!

But it's late. I can't think of a decent review. Very original. It's rare to come across such a clean piece.

This is very cute! I love how in-character everybody is-you did an excellent job with them. I hope to see lots more from you!

Oh~

I really lyke it. In the beginning, it just sotra hooks you on and makes you want to read more. 1st person perspective! Wo0t~!

I had to snicker. Really. “Hmm? Oh, I’m watching your Soul. Much better, I have to say.”“Thanks?”“Get a life!”

Hm~ in response to Silvie, I actually think the lack of description made it more believable, in a way. After all, unless the character is really studying their surroundings (like in Neku's room), they won't pay much attention to what a familiar object looks like - unless it's from 3rd person, like Angel does. Also, the beginning was a sort of flashback and almost talking to the reader, so it would probably be a bit more vague. I'll stop this review before I turn into Midnight. XD

Uh... Beat? This was tight!

...First reaction.

Seriously, this was pretty awesome. You got Neku's thoughts down, Joshua was still... Well, Joshua. Also, a fic centering on them that isn't a yaoi. As I say every time to people who do that, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Ahem. Anyway...

I guessed who it was when it came to the Tin Pin match. With how he talked and acted, I just KNEW that it was him. I didn't think he was the raven, though. Proved me wrong there!

The only thing that seemed odd were maybe one or two of Neku's lines/thoughts at the end, and a bit less description than I would have liked. Nothing that big, though, and it didn't detract from how much I enjoyed this. So... A for you!

*grins* Excellent work, Beat. I'd add more description but if thats not your forte then this is fine too. _