great story so far.

Nice chapter. Keep smiling. :-)

I'm enjoying this so far

Holy crap, that was intense! Argh, I can't get over how great this storyline is!

I really hope you'll continue to write this.

WOW! It's been a while since you updated! ;D hahaha I hope you update soon because I reallllyyyyyy want to see how this ends! :D Lovely writing skills by the way!

Dangit you made me cry! It takes a very good story to do that.

Dangit you made me cry! It takes a very good story to do that.

I found this story last night and read it because I couldn't go to sleep - and then I REALLY couldn't go to sleep because I was wondering what happens next! Fantastic skills - please keep it up! :)

I have to say, this is one of, if not the best, Jareth/Oc story i've read. It's well crafted and a fantastic read all around. Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Very interesting. Keep smiling. :-)

This story is great. I am glad you are continuing to update. Looking forward to when Madelaine meets up with Jarreth.

What a horrible life her parents put her through to prepare her for this. Can't wait for more.

this is very good...the tenth chapter was soo makes jareth seem like the evil man sarah claims him to be..but hes not really that bad..plz continue it soon

PLease continue, this is awesome

I love it please update soon C:

This is interesting. Keep smiling. :-)