Charlie is the second son's name, not George.

"asked Arthur and me", not "asked Arthur and I". You would never say "asked I" so you never say "asked Arthur and I".

Of course James was a chaser and not a seeker.

An awful time to drop this. It was a very good fic -sigh- i will mourn this forma a wile...

Why didn't you finish the rest of interlute 2?

PS, update!

is there going to be another chapter? hope there is! major cliffhanger!

Entertaining and well-written! All the characters are fairly in-character, especially Goku. It's really a shame you stopped where you did, though . . . darn 3-yr old cliffhangers.

Finally caught up with it. Great fic, I wouldn't think Harry Potter x Dragon Ball would ever work, but it does. Hope you haven't dropped this. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Anyway, I think Cho's from Ravenclaw...

LOL that's the funniest thing ever. Goku getting some "action" with the girls. Really loving this fic~! You're an awesome writer. XD

This is a brilliant plot and well written. Is it dead?

Wow, I really, really love your story! I know it's been (somewhere around) 2 years since you've updated, but as a fan I hope you'll update soon! :)

You're not actually going to leave it at that, are you? It's so difficult to find good Harry Potter/ DBZ cross-overs; I'd hate to see this one go undone. I've noticed a few punctuation errors throughout the story, and one or two missed typos, but it's so completely minor that it doesn't subtract from this awesome story one bit. Please continue!

Yo really great story hope you update soon later

I love it and hope that you decide to update soon.

I like the story though I hope you'll mix more DBZ in, because at the moment Goku etc could best anyone by their sheer speed and strength.

I also noticed an error, in this chapter you at one point said hat Cho was the HUPPELPUFF seeker.

love the story so far. bit of a cliff hanger at the end with goku transforming into the giant ape. hope you write more soon!

~PT