lol. they r good.

love it you do good fletchyries u need to make mooooooooooooooore!11

ud soon

hhehehhe love it

Haha! That was SO cool! He sounds evil XD I'm liking the fact that Tanith used to date him XD

i really like this chapter, because it's fun! keep writing plz

their funny, how do you come up with all of them?

you're a really good writer, keep going!

plz keep writing, your really good. um 4 an ending what about...oh i dunno... i like the thing about val and flech, keep going on them. maybe vals parents can walk in when their kissing or something?

it's really, really good.

PLZ KEEP WRITING! i can't wait to see what happens!

It's really good and i think it would make a great addition to the series. It's also very suspenseful and i can't wait to read your next chapter. With the bit that sais " 'that' he said 'hurt' he snarled" maybe could be changed to " 'that...hurt' he snarled" i think it would just make the chapter flow a bit more, and make Dusk sound more evil and angry.

But overall i think that it's really good and KEEP WRITING!

*laughs* People are staring at me...mercy, no! You made me laugh. Keep it up, please!

Lol, 17 was FUNNY! XD Love these drabbles :D

LMAO! This is HILARIOUS! I like the Hammy one :D and Hammy is a cute name, its what i get called by my friends at school (or Ham, or Ham Ham, or Hamster or Katy Ham or Katy Hamster :D) I liked the one with the rainbow muffins and al of theem :)

LMAO! THE TANITHS CONCOCTION ONE WAS HILARIOUS! ESPECIALLY when Val went hyper! XD