Before continuing on with the story, the only error is Shirley. It's Shirley MCLOON, not THE LOON.

I have to say, this was very creatively executed. Not simply technically, though the way the time-displacement and overlap was handled was very effective and fit in smoothly with the narrative. I meant more that it was conceptually very interesting. When I read the premise, I couldn't help but wonder: how can one pull off a fic like this, not just with an unusual and apparently unobtrusive premise, but with two of the silent toon supporting cast?

I just had to look and see. Much to my pleasant surprise, not only did you handle the critical characterization and empathy building with Beeper and Calamity, you built up an endearing interaction between them as well. Even the issues of using two silent toons were handled well, and the use of subtle 'predator prey chase themes' as a background tone? All very well done. Creatively planned, executed and interpreted: the golden trio that, combined with technical excellence and consistency, makes a Fav-worthy fic.

Aw!That's so cool and sweet and adorable!x3 I loved when Calamity and Beeper started getting along and when they made up with they're parents! SO CUTE! Also i listened to the songs you mentioned, since i love japanese songs, they were AWESOME! This is such a cool story!XD

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I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad that Calamity and Beeper's parents are still together, not broken apart like most cartoons...and I am glad the stepbrothers are getting along much better.

Would love to see more of this family, maybe a sequel this or another way their parents get together. But that's your choice if you want to do it or not. It you need ideas, just ask me.

whoa great story! i'm glad to see it have a good/semi humor ending,thanks for beliving in this story and good luck with your other stories

Heh, poor Cal; even when he wins, he loses.

Very nice ending.

Keep the good writing.

Aw! Little Beeper and Calamity were so adorable in this chapter! You made me just want to scoop them up and do an Elmyra on them. This was a really great story, one of the best TTA fanfiction out there.

You wrote an excellent story and tied it all together wonderfully. You should be very proud. I know I'll be returning to re-read your story again, and keep my eye open for anything new you write!

Excellent story, Yunno. And a great final chapter. I was expecting everything to return the way it was before they two got married, but this works just as well :D

This is a truly remarkable story! It's rare in TTA fandom to find a story about Calamity and Little Beeper (since they don't/can't talk) and even rarer to find a good one that really develops their personalities.

I love the twist of having their parents marry and the entire plot so far! Heh, when I first started noticing those discrepancies and then found out it was because everyone had traveled back in time I thought of one of my favorite Star Trek quotes: "I hate temporal mechanics" -Miles O'Brien, DS9

Bravo for the story! I eagerly await your next installment!

Pretty cool chapter. Great job on Beeper and Cal's number.

Keep the good writing.

whoa great chapter, i love the song at the end and please keep it up ok

Getting complicated...

...and yet another excellent chapter!

Pretty good one. Nice job with all the characters.

Yeah, Cal and Beeper need each other. It would be good if the roadrunner actually admits Cal is pretty smart and only fails because of bad luck, toon physics and sabotage.

Keep the good writing

well nice new chapter and great seeing the new stepbrothers slowly agreeing with each other,please keep it up