Reviews for Burthr
Thegriff chapter 5 . 6/27
Where is the chapter
draco1xx chapter 5 . 3/16/2016
This is sooooooo good! Are you still writing it?
Eragon fan chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
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plz continue chapter 5 . 2/24/2015
Love the plot, your writing and generally everything to do with the story. But plz continue posting! Plz pwetty plz with a cherry on top. xD
aardvark chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
and yet you have not posted and if you don't know what i'm talking about read ch. 5 in your story
eragonfreak chapter 5 . 5/19/2014
Dude, are you going to update this and write more chapters. What happened to a week it's been all most 5 years
eragonfreak chapter 5 . 5/19/2014
Dude, are you going to update it now? what happened to a week? it's been 5 years!
The Rider and The Overlander chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono, excellent. Continue on your story and I promise I will review your stories when I have time, Vel einradhin iet ai Shur'tugal.
Reader chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
Ahhhhh! You better finish this its really good and i have read so much crap its rediciulus so you better finish or else ill be bummbed for at least two days
CaptainBeer chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Are you going to finish this story? Please do, I like the whole jealousy thing :D. And I know you still write since you posted a story a few days ago ;)
fAteD lOvE chapter 4 . 11/7/2011
From what I can tell, scanning these last few chapters, Nasuada is quite the sneaky schemer. To be honest, her character is way off- she's a strong leader, who would graciously accept Arya and Eragon's relationship. Arya is also OOC- I'd imagine she would be more subtle in showing Eragon her feelings.

But hey, it's your fic. Congrats on finishing the big fic before this :)
Motoruven chapter 5 . 7/1/2011
For the love of christ, please continue! Your story is more interesting than the original.
A Changing Persona chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
What are you going to do...Oh, I have a bad feeling about this...
fanmanbookman chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
great story i gotta say ur better then me at hidden schemes and romance ... keep up the good work look 4ward to future chapters
FlexManSteel chapter 5 . 2/21/2011
it would be nice to get an update to this story, but if your too busy..
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