Reviews for Kaizoku Booken
Demon Flame chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Oh! Right to the heart! I read this awesome first chapter only to find out it hasn't been updated in years! Bio-Duck, if you're still out there somewhere, hear my plea and please continue this story until its completion.
blue-hart chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
i wont a ZoroXnaruto that woad be so sexy and i like the story cant what for the next part.
Eternal-DreamWriter chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Wow. So wheres the next chapter? xD I love this story!
bluedot chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
omg soo exciting! this is going to get interesting! great job!
Falvern chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Interesting story. This chapter was pretty good grammar wise. I'm glad that you introduced Naruto so early into the One Piece story line. Is Naruto the same age he is in cannon? He must be because he's still wearing that ugly ass jumpsuit. Hopefully, he will get some new clothes. Do you plan for him to eat a devil fruit? If so, please don't make it the Kaze Kaze no Mi, since almost every author gives him that fruit. As for the pairing, I would vote for Boa Hancock because no author has yet to do that pairing justice. Although, I could also see him paired with Nami or Robin. Looking forward to your next update.
Leo's Katanas chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
O.o

Awesome story so far!

Please update soon!
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
kiyomos chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
awesome story dude! cant wait till the next chapter! update soon pls!

Ja Ne! ()
FireKitsGal chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
loved it plz upgrade soon!
ichigo1508 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
lol i love it please keep updating in the future i can tell this is going to get interesting in the future!
T00STr00nG chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
very well done. But please for heavens sake let Naruto be oh i dunno fuckin strong and not weak like in anime or manga...sheesh.
Evil E. Evil chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
this looks intersting
animefan29 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Well it doesn't seems kind of interesting, just two questions. One, what is wrong with Naruto's outfit? I mean sure his first jumpsuit was pretty bad, but his Shippuden outfit, which seems to be the right time-frame, has more black than orange, and the orange is more of a dusky burnt orange than the bright "orange" orange of the first outfit.

Second, what's up with Naruto? I mean it just does not seem to be like his character to pull a kunai on someone he doesn't know and is not threatening him in some way. I'll admit that the way those three pirates were acting it could be interpreted that Zoro was a tough guy bullying them to row, but in that situation I think Naruto would be more "in your face" to get his questions answered.

Sorry, but I felt the need to get my opinion across.
howlingwindofthestorm chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
this is so freaking awesome! i am already in love with this, i can't wait for the next episode.
Phnxfyr1 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Can't wait for more
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