Still really enjoying the story but I wish there wasn't as many spelling errors as there are it really makes things hard to follow sometimes 1 or 2 I can handle but this is just too much mate.

I really like the story so far and what I find really cool about this fic is I can totally see this being a actual BL arc you kept the characters personalities pretty much the same from what I've read so far and I haven't read the manga only watched the show so Idk what actually happens canonically after the Yokuza arc but this story feels like a really good continuation of the main plot of BL can't wait to keep reading this.

So beretta 92's come standard with 15 rnd mags. With factory 20's being available at the time the Anime was based in. The story is excellent and this isn't my first read through. And the 93R is a safe, single, burst. It would take some serious modifications to the internals to make it auto. And it would compromise the function of the firearm. And gun connoisseur Ms. Rebecca would know that and never own one that had been modified in such a way.
This is now way a criticism of the story. Just some info if you keep writing black lagoon stories. If you want to give her an auto pistol she would probably go nuts for a micro-uzi. They aren't accurate or very controllable, but it takes an act of god to keep them from running.

Does Rock wear a long sleeve shirt?

The plural of "cutlass" is "cutlasses." Good story so far, though! I luvs me some Revy!

In that kind of work, you endanger your team if you don't know how to take care of yourself. Rock stepped up, good thing now Revy won't be alone in a fight. Where ever they are Rock will have her back.

Heh, rear seat belts in a GTO unlikely but ok.

For those of you wondering what I'm talking about, rear seat belts in a 1965 Pontiac GTO were a very rare option... Yes seat belts were an option back in the day lol

It is indeed an interesting and funny read.
A very nice fic, that keeps you entertained and interesed.
Grammar; as I confess happens that same to me; had its typos here and there, and sometimes it looks a bit rushed, but in all, a solid, funny and Lagoonish fic.
Very nice work, dear sir

One of my favorite fanfics ever. I love the store, the way you smoothly changed Rock's personality without it being super stupid, this is exactly want the manga to turn into.

I had just recently discovered this looking for a good RevyxRock fanfic, and overlooking the numerous grammatical errors (I know that English is not your native language), and I was not disappointed. Most of the time I was reading I was laughing my ass off at the things Revy and Rock were doing. Nicely done, and this is now the newest addition to my list of favorites.

You want to know something? I have read your story and reread it more times than I can count. It's just so damn good. Th grammar could be improved but the story is good and you have a lot worked out in this.

The OC's are great, you have a lot worked out in this one and I love the romance you got worked out in this. If you ever decide to come back to FanFiction. I'll be sure to be around for that.
Saluut.

Okay, I have been reading some chapters on this. Gotta admit a few things. One. Your story is pure fucking awesome, even for this show standards. Rock is a decent mixture of a bit OOC and still close to his canon part without the slipping.
Second. Rock X Revy, meh, why not? I like what you did here and even with this, it's cute. The lemon was a bit short if you look to the previous chapter but as writer, lemons are about the hardest thing to write.

Speaking about writing. While grammar is good, it's sometimes hard to read due the fragments setting. But given that there are way worse out there and your story is good, I'll be around for the rest.
Saluut.

NOOOOO, GOD FUCKING DAMIT, IT CANT END HEAR! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
I NEED MORE REVY

Very good story, I look forward to the sequels updates.

Thank you for writing it.

it's always the quiet ones