I really enjoy your writing! It's fast-paced, but your word choice is clearly well thought-out too. I loved your characterization of Mokuba. Finally, Jounochi/Joey's first example of what he likes about Kaiba was hilariously in-character. I really appreciated that.

Okay! I realize I'm late to the party here, but I always appreciate reviews, even on stories that are older.

Your writing style is awesome. Not too descriptive, yet in-character and easy to put a mental picture to. The way you switch between Kaiba and Joey's perspectives is subtle and doesn't disrupt the flow of the story.

Overall, it's a very strong first chapter. I'm excited to read the next one. :3

oh man! i was really enjoying that i wish u finished it! so goooddd

This is pretty good! Update soon please!

I'm with the other people, please don't end this here! D: This story is so well written and fun with surprises around every corner, I'd hate to have to imagine my own ending (which would not be fun :/ Serious).

Please consider writing more.

love the story so far. so cant wait for the next chapter of this story. very sweet an cute 2.

Busy or not, you can't leave us hanging like this!

This story is well-written so far, and I like the idea. I also like Jounouchi's idea of not telling each other what they like until after their papers are turned in. Keep up the good work!

That was great. I really like your potrayal of Seto and Jou. Honestly, I haven't read any fanfiction in awhile, and I just so happen to be looking through someone's forum and found this one. I am most definitely intriguied. I look forward to reading the rest.

this is a really cool fic hahaha

jous feeling the heat!

imgunna fv this... update soon!

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I been sticking wit this story n was happy when u updated, Ty 4 that. Hope there's more to come. Hope u also feel better! It was so funny about jou switching position on the coach n seto got fed up lol! Have. Merry Christmas n a very happy new year! n hope this story continues! D

More More more more more? :D I adore this pairing and I'm eager to see some lovey dovey stuff!

OMG! SUCH AN AMAZING CHAPTER! X3 E! They are getting there! Hint hint! 3 The love has already started ;3

I love this story! Welldone and keep it up! ~MM

p.s- Aw! You have a baby! CUTE! X3

Some things to think about:

You have two paragraphs beginning with 'at this moment' in close contact with each other.

Also, you used the incorrect blond(e). Blond is when referring to a male, and blonde is when referring to a female. Just think females have more hair then mean and so their blonde would have more letters. :)

Anyway, onto the good stuff! I love the idea for this fic. All the scenarios are just playing out in my head and I can't wait to see what you come up with and it's so exciting! I think the whole part with the teacher knowing when a student was lying to her and all that was a little too convenient to be believable, but ah well.

One last note...one of the lowest things an author can do is threat readers into reviewing. If you're only writing for reviews, then you probably shouldn't be writing. Honestly, I had begun this review before I had even reached the end, and if I hadn't begun it before I read that spiel for reviews, I wouldn't have reviewed.

Well, anyway, onto the next chapter.

Wow. Keep writing more. I love this pairing.

Uwahh! This is so cute! Keep up the awesome work! :D