Cool, you rewrote this! I personally like this one better, it was more detailed and flowed more nicely! Not that the other one wasn't good, that isnt it at all! But, you know what i mean! Amazing work, i cant wait to read the next chapters!

I love your stories sooooo much

You stopped where the story should've begun

I like the fight scene and great story line! Please update soon. :)

Omg, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez update soon

Your story is amazing please update more reggularly please or i will hunt you down and murder you
Hehe justkidding sbout the murder part

Hi there i finally have an account im the same person as Maestro-Alucard on deviantart and can i ask you if its ok if i can use the two characters from your story in myn (currently in writing) but leave allcredit to you in disclaimer?

Thankyou.

Oops i accidentally posted tge message early
Name is Maestro-Alucard.
Thnx. ;)
Love story

Hi i would just like to ask you something
I love your story and im recently in writing of
My own story of beastboy at similar times
If its okay obce i upload the story that i could
Use the characters stoke and his friend in my story
(only briefly but leave all credit in disclaimer
For you.
If you could answer me back my deviantart name
Is

Batman os
Pure awesome

aw man, where's the next chapter? This is such an exciting story, I wanna read more :D

You best finish this! lol i love it and i want to know more of what happend! keep writiing!

I will beta you if that is what you want. But you will need to send me your next chapter, or I can send you an idea for your next chapter. Since I am sure your reviewers-myself included- would enjoy another chapter. You are really good so far, grammar, spelling, and punctuation mostly correct. If I was your beta I would have an easy job. Now mind you, I can only beta you for your TT's fics, cause I don't like BTR, and thus, do not watch it.

Keep writing. I hope you pass whatever block has struck you in this story.

-Kangarooney-

I love it! Please continue!

Great story so far. I wonder how they'll save him.