Heh :) Cute ending,... Abby Temple has a real ring to it, don't you think so?

Good story.

What a sad, suspenseful, and lovely story! Three cheers for the adorable Abby/Connor moment at the end. Connor's such a whump-magnet, and this whump was written well. You're on my Author Alert, for sure!

Aw...Conner bless his little fingerless gloves. Thank God he was okay! Well done, really good!

I didnt feel like signing in but i put my name anyway...so anyway, i loved this story even tho it was sadistic & cruel 2 connor, i love the guy but he certainly attracts angst doesnt he? hahaha excellent job! if u continue awesome if not id b sad but happy that u didnt end it with ch 8 haha that would have been sadistic. loved it & if u do write more cant wait 2 read more!

I didnt feel like signing in but i put my name anyway...so anyway, i loved this story even tho it was sadistic & cruel 2 connor, i love the guy but he certainly attracts angst doesnt he? hahaha excellent job! if u continue awesome if not id b sad but happy that u didnt end it with ch 8 haha that would have been sadistic. loved it & if u do write more cant wait 2 read more!

Great ending... Can't wait till your next story...

I. Love. You.

This has to have been the best Primeval fic I have ever read!

Great job!

~Illegally Anonymous

this needs an epiloge.

love this chapter very robert cormier

Ah! Connor! No!

Yeesh, great (and violent) fanfic. Kinda sad that there's only one more chapter, though!

~SW

please update

Argh! cliffhanger! Gah! LOVE the story so far! The Conner whump is perfection! More please!

AH NO you can't leave us hanging, we MUST have more. Poor little Connor. Very glad to finally see Nick caring about what happens to our boy. Glad Lester is there, I don't know why but I like him especially after how kind he was to Connor in series 3.

Now, WRITE! It's been 5 days! Get very very very bored and write at least 2 or 3 more chapters. We have a lot of ground to cover here. The sweet and lovely h/c beside moments from the team and Lester, then the waking up and get his faculties back and many visits from his team. Getting released and his first day back at the ARC and repairing his beloved ADD. :) Hehehehe hint hint hint. :) I can keep going if you like? LOL :)

What? Only one chapter left? No. You're supposed to keep entertaining us forever and ever and ever.

Also: how can you possibly wrap everything up so quickly?