Wow.

awww ;( i'ma gonna cry! poor Anakin... he needs a hug. so do you Metaphorical Hugs, ~Gexie of the DisOrganization~ _

Interesting look at that fight.

Aww, just- tragic.

I really liked this. I thought from the summary it would be a stormtrooper, but you were right- it was a point of view I didn't expect.

I liked that you portrayed Anakin as still being deeply flawed, even though he was separate from Vader. It rang more true that way. (Although "more true" is probably not the best way to put it.)

Still-really good.

OMG...OMGOMGOMG! I...I cried...Oh this story is good and sad at the same time...Anakin is still in there... The part that I am in tears is...

...Why are you smiling?

No...What are you doing? You're raising you lightsaber, you're surrendering,no...Why are you giving up? No, stop it, he'll kill you, don't do it, stop it stop it STOP IT...!

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...Master?

(That part is oh my God...Love it)

AWWWW! That has to be one of the saddest endings EVER. :( Poor Ani...Ah well, this was a great little one-shot, even if it had me almost in tears. _

An original take on a classic scene. I love how you highlighted his internal conflict between Anakin and Vader. Your progression through Anakin's thought process, both on the Death Star and Mustafar, is great. Keep up the good work!

How cute! It took me a few paragraphs to realize the narrator was Anakin, but it was all very, very sweet. I loved how he almost lets Vader's emotions control him towards the end, and how even though he sees how Vader represses him, he thinks he was right in choosing the dark side. I wish I could say more, but it was simply touching. Thank you :)

Fascinating. I like the train of thought, and would be interested in seeing more of Anakin's spectatorship in key scenes throughout ANH, ESB, and RoTJ.

Wicked Good!

I liked what Anakin had to say and I like the last lines.

Moving, heart-wrenching, insightful, beautiful! The way that you portrayed Anakin as separate from Vader (without it making him seem like he has a multiple personality disorder) was very clever and well-done. It's an interesting examination of what that "good in him" thought in that hangar. So often I think we tend to forget that Vader is still Anakin during Episode IV.

Wonderful overall! Favoriting! )

~M.E.

:o. wow. My God, that was good! I haven't read a story that good in so long. There is nothing horrible about. Wow.

I thought this was really good. I like the way you portrait Anakin inside of Vader, with his own thoughts and feelings. He really is a bit schizophrenic, isn't he?

I think the end is the best part of the story (not because it's the end but because it is done really well). Unfortunately, the story is also very sad - not that that's a bad thing, I just can't properly review sad stories (although I do enjoy reading them from time to time), I'm much better with funny ones. Still, I hope you appreciate my best try!

Poor Anakin, trapped in his shell.