Lea is Dutch's daughter? That's awesome!

Very good

If there is any chance you'd be willing to come back and continue the story, it would be greatly appreciated. I love this story, all 5 chapters, you can just tell it'll be an amazing story.

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS PREDATOR UPDATE! Why is it all the good stories the author fucking quits please please please update this!

OMG... So good! Please keep writing the story! I need to know what is going on... I might turn into a bit of a creeper.. LOL

So'cla is awesome! Haha I love how downtrodden he gets when she calls him unworthy. I think he would've cleaned out Charle's skull before giving it to her, though. I love your characters! Your plot is interesting, too. Are So'cla's clansman ok with him courting a human?
On another note, whilst your grammar is good (definitely better than some other stories I read) there are instances where you would leave out a comma such as:
"Muttering her affirmative she paused in her approach..." You need a comma after 'affirmative' because it goes from one action to another... If that makes sense. It seems to be a reoccurring mistake, and I thought you should know.
Otherwise I loved it! Update soon please!

I love it! i love it! continual soon please!

Another story that I absolutely LOVE. I actually hope that head ISN'T Charles for the simple and grossly entertaining idea that So'cla would catch Charles in the act of trying to press his suit with Leah. I can just imagine the bullshit that he'd be spewing at the time about how 'bitches' like her need a 'real man' to 'handle' them and 'show them what they really want'. Leah would be able to see past him or over his shoulder, looking right at So'cla who couldn't seem to decide if he found Charles amusing, pathetic or if he should just forgo using his weapons and tear him apart by hand. Which would Leah prefer? LOL. Keep writing! xx

Awesome chapter I wonder what just happened at the end, I must say this is a very interesting story and I do hope you find the time to finish it.

Update Soon Plz :)

Another great chapter, I wonder how long Leanne can resist So'cla advances? Hopefully she wont be to mad about the cat lol :D.

Super Amazing Chapter so loved it, the story just keeps getting better and better :D

Another interesting chapter I see Leanna loves injuring her a predator lol :D.

Whoa super awesome beginning chapter cant wait to read the next chapter I do hope you plan on continuing this to the end.

I love this story! Keep it up! :D

You can't stop there u hear me, lol I love this story.
P.S. u were right about the forked tongue, I just checked it out. I love these movies. Peace