Not sure if you sde this since it's been a while, but this is still one of my favourite fanfics and every now and then I come back to it. I just like the story and how its written and do hope you continue/finish it at some point. Even though it's already been some years, but you never know. I'll be there if that continuation actually happens. Hope you doing good at least. :)

Every few months I come back to reread this I love it so, so much argh. This tournament is so dangerous

Did you end this on a cliffhanger? Such a shame. It's the best fan fiction I've ever read. Everything is spelled properly, proper grammar and such. I'd love to see how it ends.

I still really love this fanfic! I hope you continue to write for it :)

One of the best things about Link is that he's super open to alternate interpretations. I really like the way this Link is portrayed, and I'm eager to see how this turns out!

Link didn't stay in the past as long as I was expecting. (He's going back, I can feel it.)
As brilliant as ever, I see! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Im surprised master hand didnt set up that deal with Erika for Marth. The fact he's more like a free agent with ability to endorse independant contracts gives Marths character a boost in my opinion... but maybe thats the reason he had him killed? Seems like anything with Marths name on it could easily spell revenue for Hand...

Ah man, I'm a sucker for FalSam. And daaaangggg, Snake is moving in. I can only imagine some sort of assassination going on (cause that guy is shady). Again, I'm so glad to see you update! Looking forward to next time!

Oh Triple D, what are we going to do with you. But on a side note, I really liked the interaction of Link and Marth, I almost wanna say they're two sides of the same coin. Also, now you got me wondering about Erika, while the game and anime version of her is a bit domestic, her manga-self was always acutely aware of anything happening around her as well being well versed in archery. Well looking forward to the next chapter as always.

Goldenfox444

Excellent! I'm so glad that you decided to continue writing this story! I'm still on board and reading - it's exceptional :) Thank you for updating!

Please tell me you're working on the next chapter. Come on, you can't end it there!

(I have a sneaking suspicion Link may end up messing around with the past…)

Really, REALLY interesting how this will turn out! You're very great at writing, using vocabulary that I would actually have to google and find out what they mean. Everything is awesome as far as writing goes. Can't wait to see what's next on chapter 13! One question though; what's the time span between your updates? I don't know if I can't wait lol.

I really can't believe that you updated!
I'm really happy about it because this Fanfic is really awesome!
I'm already excited for the next chapter! :)

Alright, this is on mobile. My qualms with the chapter are as follows.

Link mentions he became a warrior because of oot's events, but he doesn't mention that he was super lazy before that, as navi notes at the start of the game. Minor, but it stood out to me. It's possible you didn't know that, maybe people who haven't restarted oot 30 times wouldn't notice.

I don't like the moveset premise, while it hasn't been explained, it makes me expect something unnecessary and silly to be in a fic that could otherwise be taken seriously.

Fox's dialogue seems unrealistic for any character, unless you were trying to make him a huge douche. Just that everyone seems to like Fox seems weird.

Why does link not know his age?

As for the descriptions, they're good. Nothing is distracting from the story. Link has a good internal monologue. I like the story. It's better than dean koontz.

Yay!

I'm super happy to see this has been updated.

I'm a big fan of Fire Emblem and the competitive scene of SSBM (Legend of Zelda to a lesser extent but I know the backstory), as well as a fledgling competitive player myself, and I picked up this story something like 6 months ago. To see it finally updated (it's basically the only good Smash Bros. story I've read) was great, can't wait to see where it goes from here!

I like that you've innovated the story to become more subterfuge and political rather than a generic battle or romance. Link's character as the uncivilized hero works very well here; my only gripe is that in the games, he was in the original Smash Bros. unlike Marth. But the story wouldn't work any other way given the Ocarina's powers.

Anyways, very happy to see you back, just please don't take as long on the next chapter!