You really need to work on looking the words you use up and the grammar needs to improve but overall the story was good and needs an update

la suite de naruto la route de l'aube

Go tsume! Kick their asses and those hairs they call dicks!

One of if not THE worst yet.

seen better, seen FAR worse, so ill keep reading, might be entertaining at least, but this is not looking to be anything special amongst the KH/Naruto crossovers. sorry if that statement bothers you, it is in no way a flame, just my opinion.

A gunblade, seriously? Why not a tri-colored Keyblade, Gold, black and silver. Gold to signify Light, Black for Darkness, and Silver for Twilight. And name it Truth Bringer?

People like you should be used to Kishimoto's crap by now I mean seriously, he made Naruto an ignorant, malnourished knucklehead that didn't even think to use his Oiroke no jutsu to make him-self look like someone else(hell he did that once to try and get a kiss from the pink haired whore when he could have done that to get some real clothes). Made all but one of the female graduating class into obsessed fan girls, not to mention Temari who might I add was supposed to be a true kunnoichi. The only one who wasn't a fan girl was far too damn shy and had the self-confidence of a gold fish. His sensei focused more on the prodigy rather than the ones who truly needed the help. Jiraiya focused heavily on trying to get Naruto to learn how to use the Kyubi's Chakra rather than helping Naruto learn things that could help in his fights against Sasuke. Hell if he'd had Jiraiya give Naruto the necessary knowledge of the Shadow clone jutsu and then told him to get creative with the Tree climbing and water walking exercises he might have been able to complete the rasengan one handed something I have yet to see him do(considering I stopped watching the show right after Yamato got abducted simply because I got caught up). And also let's not forget the beauty of seals Jiraiya was a freaking Fuinjutsu master Kishimoto could have had Naruto start learning that after learning to control fuzzbutts chakra failed. The man wanted Naruto to be a happy go lucky idiot who'd either die at the end of the series or finally get together with a bitch. You ask me Kishimoto favors Sasuke because he's "a miss-understood" prick who's out to prove himself the best.

You know the chapters for all your stories are way too short.

Nice job on the story so far.I hope you keep up the good work and I wish you luck with your future storeis/chapters.

NIce chapter. Very nice.

YEAH! Naruto is going to kick their ass. GO NARUTO!

u asking wat about hinata who give a fuck i'm a fan of narusaku but still sakura is a whore and a banshe bitch but seriously who cares about hinata she always stalk him and not only that hinata confess her love to naruto but naruto didnt love her back

well it was going to be fun that hinata died i hate that bitch and if u ask why i am reading your story because it have naruhina in it well this is awesome or i could just force u not to make no naruhina i hate that couple

YEAH! THAT WAS AWESOME! Fukagku got his balls cut off! LOL! Keep it up. Make Konoha pay.

OH yeah. Heck yeah. Very nice.

Can't wait for the ass kicking to begin.