It's a good story, but why does Cosmo pronounce everybody's names with a san at the end?

I like trains

Don't bring urself down i love this story.

Awesome! I'm going for the sequel!

love it love it love it 5/5 love it truly a work of art

Wow... I don't know where to begin.

Pretty much the entire story - start to finish, opening to conclusion, exposition to denouement - was remarkably well-written. More so than most writers, you've managed to capture the distinct atmosphere of Sonic X while reaching beyond the show's boundaries. I consider this to be a refreshingly original take on an idea that the fandom has worn practically to shreds - proof that Cosmo's return to life can still be accomplished in new, innovative ways.

At this point (aka, the end), my negative comments are minor and few. For all its individuality, the story still follows the most basic "Cosmo's Return" archetype, with the result that the climactic scene (knowing, as I read it, that I was on the final chapter) wasn't so climactic. I mean, they're in a standoff with Death itself, no means of escape, and you don't seem like the tragedy type; what other result could there be?

Regardless, I'm impressed. Your mechanics are virtually flawless, your descriptive skill quite a bit above average, and the storyline was obviously given a good deal of effort and planning. After this success, I can't wait to see how you handle a longer, more complex plot. I'll be keeping an eye out.

That was worthwhile. I've never actually seen the end of the third series because I know what was going to happen, and I'm too much of a screaming, drooling Tails fan to want to watch his heart being ripped out.

Mephiles is an excellent antagonist. I didn't use the world villain, because if we look at it objectively, all he did was enable Tails to save Cosmo, then give them back their child. You gave the impression of plans within plans, wheels within wheels, tails within tails... sorry... excellently.

I enjoyed it... say dude...

I'm SMBZrocks in deviantart... when r u posting this there?

This is an awesome story! You should make another were sonic or Amy goes there. I think that at looking at the family tree would be so funny to see Amy's reaction. Sonic would probably be annoyed at the future.

Very, very good! i'm not much of a person for romance fiction's but this one kept me hooked till the end. You made all the characters "feel" right too. I hope you get round to doing another one explaining Mephiles motives. Great read!

You can always go to the 4Kids site to watch any episode of Sonic X.

The story is great. I love how you had Tails take total control of everything and made 'em wipe the floor with Dark Oak. And putting Mephiles into the story was a pretty clever. I don't know much about Meph, being as I never have (And most likely never will) played Sonic 06, but you portrayed him as an evil mastermind pretty well.

I think the story was amazing. I usually don't like romance fictions, but this was great! I would kill to see another story like this one explaining Mephiles plans. 20/10! XD

not bad

wow, where are they?

Great chapter, very detailed and mysterious. I hope you don't cut this story short, it's very good xD