Why is everyone so mean to McKay? As if Rush is so great! And Carter, snobby bitch.. At least McKay is funny!

oh that was hilarious will there be anything else with the apparently sentient keno's of doom?

that was hilarious thank you

I very much enjoyed this :D

You got the banter between Eli and McKay absolutely spot on, while adding a touch of humour to McKays arrival on the Destiny by emphasizing how much every seems to dislike him.

Very well written, I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors. It was a very fun little story that could have fit in between an episode of SGU perfectly.

I was a little confused by the Kino side story though... but oh well :)

Very well done.

Toclafane! lol xD

loved the crossover, hope they do something like this on the show (:

“So what you're saying,” O'Neill said slowly, “is that we let you run around an alien ship for two hours and...you turned on some lights.”

xD rofl!

interesting

bwahahaha! j

lmao i love eli's closing lines and well the whole thing actually lol, keep it up please

Thanks for writing this.

It was a cute story, and well written, but I would definitly (sp?) label it PWP.

Such funny little fic :D

Let's just hope that the writers don't get the idea to McKay on the ship. He is so unrealistic as a scientist.

Oh, and it's KINO, not KENO.

Next time, they need to send Zelenka. :D

absolutely loved it! you captured mckay perfectly! and i could so imagine him acting this all out in my head. then words he uses, down to his mannerisms. and the ending! 2 sentences and i can imagine jack at that table with that look on his face that says it all! amazing writing and great skill! xx