I love Momo and his attachment to Zoro its super cute.

The cuteness at the is over powering dawww!

and finally i finished reading this story, i have to say that it was intense. but the dreams were very nice tool to show how zoro changed so much in the inside. although i have to say that you put too much into one or two chapters, and that felt a little too Fast for my taste.
you could instead split them to other days and other events instead of compressing them together one after the other like that. it felt to much rash, instead to slow developed in zoro.
so that the only thing that really Bugged me in this story.
but other then that, i really like the ending XD lol and how sanji wanted zoro after they come back to the ship. and how he still Getting angry at him, god His reaction to robin that found them out was just prushless lol. love that, and zoro so hot *.*

I enjoyed this story! It was a good take on a zoro/sanji relationship. Very well written! Good job! :)

-Yvonne

ooow how cute love the idea and yes small chapters is better

Gahh! I feel like I'M going crazy because of all the dreams! Seriously, chapter after chapter of dreams, dreams, dreams! I've reached my limit with all the dreams, so I will stop reading here.

Also, I was irritated by how repetitive it got up to chapter 9, which is where I'm stopping. I don't like patterns in the things I read, and yours was; get hurt, angst, dream, dream, dream, get hurt, angst, dream, dream, dream, dream. Then to mix it up you have limited fighting between Zoro and Sanji, which I will say falls under the angst.

On top of that, your English could use some work. Sometimes there were issues with sentence arrangement, other times there were problems with conjugations of words, but most frequently I saw just mixing up of words. You would substitute the right word with a word that sounds similar, but means something totally different. I know this is probably a good place to practice some of your English skills, so I think it is appropriate that I let you know where you are making your mistakes.

But on a lighter note; your plot did capture me enough so that I read a little more than half of the entire fic. So that's good! That means I did see the potential of the story, I just couldn't take any more dreams! xD

great story! i was listening to Ed Sheeran - Give me love while reading and it suited the story very well,. i loved reading it, thank you!

Ahhh, it's so intense, so hair-raising, even scaring. Don't know how I'm going to sleep. Though I enjoyed this fic so much. You managed to create a perfect blend of angst, horror, love, passion and cuteness. Thanks a lot)))

wow, truly loved this story! It was really scary in the beginning but luckily it all turned out good;)

Nice! Love the plot

Wow! What a drastic change in the atmosphere...not that I'm complaining. I was getting a little depressed...but I loved the darkness before this, as well, haha.

Wow, this is really intense. There are a very few little errors in terms of your tense uses, but other than that, the language is really moving, and I am definitely intrigued! I look forward to reading the rest.

Yay! Happy for the update. And I was looking at my Japanese to English book and found out randomley the momo means peach lol...yeah I'm an idiot

zoro laughing the cutest thing ever :)
looking forward to the next chapter!

Awwwwwww! How adorable! XD They made it back and I didn't even know!

"Little red riding hoot"? You're too fucking adorable! XD

Glad you updated! I completely forgot about this story!