| Reviews for Lullaby |
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   Shaggy37 chapter 17 . 1/30/2011 Outstanding chapter! |
| Shaggy37 chapter 16 . 1/23/2011 Outstanding chapter! |
| MasterRev chapter 15 . 11/8/2010 This is an absolutely amazing story you have crafted here. I absolutely love your prose, as well as the clever way you are mixing past events with the present. Not to mention the romantic tension and deep characterizations are very well done. This is very excellent work and I am appalled that you haven't received more reviews. Keep it up! Look forward to reading more from you soon! |
| Shaggy37 chapter 14 . 7/10/2010 Outstanding chapters! |
| Anderfail chapter 14 . 7/8/2010 Harry is completely useless in this story, even mores than canon, which is saying a lot because he was pretty useless there too. Hermione apparently is friends with everyone, gets along with everyone, and is on a first name basis with professors. She is treated like an adult by everyone while Harry is treated like he is 10. Way to marginalize Harry's role in order to make Hermione into Hermione Sue. I'm an H/Hr shipper, but stories where he relies on her to do everything piss me off because they require him to have the equivalent intelligence of a 5 year old. He's in a fucking war, don't you think it would be useful to learn healing charms or do something other than whine about everything? Hell you've dramatically elevated Hermione from canon why not do the same to Harry? It's obvious you want Hermione to look great, but you're doing it by making Harry look helpless. I fully expect you to have Hermione both kill Voldemort and Harry and blatantly ignore the prophecy. |
| emily chapter 13 . 7/7/2010 please please please finish this |
| Shaggy37 chapter 12 . 6/11/2010 Outstanding chapter! |
| DislicksicPotatoe chapter 1 . 1/20/2010 Wow. I wish I could write wounderfully as you! |
| Shaggy37 chapter 10 . 1/10/2010 Outstanding Ending/Chapter! Was that the end? |
| Sayf123 chapter 9 . 1/10/2010 Great story, dont stop. |
| Shaggy37 chapter 9 . 1/1/2010 Outstanding chapter! |
| Shaggy37 chapter 8 . 12/16/2009 Outstanding chapter! |
| pyroseyes chapter 7 . 12/3/2009 wow! it's been a while since I wrote a review...school is on a roll it's taking me a long time reading updates... Anyway, I love the two chaps. the end of chapter 7 just made me teary eye. The flashbacks she had made me think of what have voldie did to here. Cant wait to see Harry's reaction. Nice one. I look forward to your next chapter. |
| Sardonic Irony chapter 7 . 11/29/2009 Lol i know there are few reviews but as i have told you before it is a great fic and you know i look forward to the updates. I have already spoken to you about what i think but i will say once again that this fic is brillaint and well written. Don't give up and keep writing this it is really good. C. |
| Shaggy37 chapter 7 . 11/27/2009 Nice chapter! |
