It truly was an amazing fantasy...Thank you for sharing your mad writing skills and your time...loved peeking through the window.

My favorite line...

'...Not because of any impending orgasm - which wasn't so impending now that his hand was on my cheek instead of my dick - but because he looked sorry and worried and...fuck me...sweet.'

**smiling**
With my nose still hanging off the window pane...Can't deny that I really like seeing these two Boyz...together! ;}

Take Care and Happy Writing...Always,
Rita ;D

Thanks for sharing.

Wow this was a hot little citrus! Would have loved to see this continue just to see your version of Jasper wrapping his mind around wanting Peter! Thanks so much for writing! Mwah!

O.M.F.G this was the best P/J shit I ever managed to stumble across :D how fucking epic! omg! I loved it thank you for writing it _ I can't find nearly enough good J/P FFn's and you have wrote like.. one of my top 3 :D buwahah!

Much love to you! This was super awesome :) And you're a great writer!

-Panda

I loved it. i found it a very descriptive one shot and it was emotional too.

surprisingly sweet. i need to know what happens to these guys

I really loved this.

that was so hot omg I love slash now that was amazing lol great story

This was so incredible. What a wonderful piece of writing! I love your Jasper and Peter. So fun to watch the nervousness vanish and Jasper just give himself over.

Damn that was freaking hot. I so wanna turn into a gay male right now (straight female lol)

Definetly didn't see this one coming! Good work love!

This was just a little tidbit of wonderful. I am so happy that you found a happy ending for Peter and Jasper. I will allow my imagination to run wild and these two will find a happy and rewarding life together. There is almost nothing hotter than LVP's SoaPM Jasper, however, SoaPM Jasper in a slightly angsty yet very intensely rewarding encounter with Peter? Total hot win.
Thank you for this.

I really enjoyed this alternate universe!

This may be the best story I've read on FanFiction - definitely one of the top 3. I've just read it the second time, and just... thank you :)

it's funny and serious, and just hot, all at the same time!

Umm...yeah...WOW! I don't read slash and I don't even know what made me read this! I guess because I saw it was from Son of a Preach Man which I am obsessed! But dang girl, you sucked me into this story before I even knew what hit me and couldn't stop reading it! Gah! Great job! Really, it makes perfect since for Peter to be gay! Yeah...Peter could so be gay!