Incredible. It could have been dragged out for a little longer, but it was still a great story. I really didn't see the ending coming, and I think you captured Squall and Seifer really well.

Aww, that was so sad '(. I started crying at one point. Well written, and shocking. You rigged it to where it was uncertain who would die and who would live, and that was a nice touch. Very well-written too. I loved it _

How could you separate them like that? O_O

I agree with Jade that there should be a follow-up chapter on this. I feel like there's no closure to it, like it ended so abruptly.

Other than that, good job on the story. I always like reading fanfics where their rivalry and friendship grows post-war _

Wow Great job on this! i think that this needs a follow up chapter, there is still soo much that you can do with this, please think about it.

Again great job!

Jade