Love this story gotta say you captured gwen's character really well this is exactly how I see her on the show not able to embrace new things or jealousy over others and thoughts on betraying Rhy.

AARRGGHHHH! I cannot believe you threw away this absolutely amazing story! I have read this non-stop, not even stopping to answer the phone - I wanted to find out what was going to happen that badly. Now I find that you've just abandoned this tale at a critical moment - Who are these creatures? Some sort of plasmavores? Space Vamps? How will they switch back into their own bodies? How did the creature get into the Hub? Why wasn't it following Ianto's body and its date, waiting for Ianto to go alone for a moment? Why on earth would you go to so much trouble to write what is a truly mesmerising story only to walk away before you'd finished it? I am so frustrated! This story has intrigue, emotion, confusion, danger, strength - you've got the character's personalities down so well, Gwen and Ianto trying to adapt and understand! I'm truly heartbroken.

Pity this is not updated anymore. It was quite good.

Pity this is not updated anymore. It was quite good.

"Ianto found he was quite glad that he had at least maintained his witty sarcasm." LOL. That made me giggle so, so much! I actually love this story, just discovered it on somebody's favourites. Ima carry on reading now :)

This story is absolutely fantastic!

It's a brilliant idea which I have seen in other fanfictions before but it has never been explored in so much detail nor have the emotions of those involved been shown much, but your fic is brilliant and in Chapter 15 I really felt for Gwens character and could see the stress and such that she would be going through. I know you don't like Gwen but please don't turn this fic into Gwen Bashing because i think it ruins it when the writers let their personal opinions get in the way of their stories as it makes it unrealistic to the show.

I also like the fact you are being nice to Rhys because I absolutely adore him xD and you really nailed his character in that last chapter by the way. Nice idea to bring Martha in aswell, she nicely fills a gap.

Really good stuff :D Please update it soon! xD

You got the characterisation perfect!

A really emotional chapter.

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Wow, that was a really great chapter! So intense!

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ps. Sorry about the rugby! ;)

Thanks for the great chapter! I must say i am really hating Gwen right now, i mean she damaged IANTO'S hand! How is that fair! If i was Ianto i would go and get a reeaalyy bad hair cut! Oh wait Gwen already has one! Sorry just pretty upset over Gwen surving CoE and Ianto not :( Update soon please!

12 - 14: brilliant!

And for this chapter, I loved the way you compared Ianto to a tamed dragon :-)

yayyaa glad you are back and feeling better :) great chapter! gr evil gwen! XD

Wales all the way!

I. Love. This. Story. I do. I really do! :D

Oh dear, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...even if she's in a man's body...

Revenge? O, can't wait for tomorrow's chapter! :)

Exciting! :)

Next chapter preview looks great too!