This makes an excellent start for a multichaptered story(?

Updated soon, please!

As Sakura muses of Ulquiorra I can imgaine her reclining in some sort of chaise or whatnot studying his movements as he moved silently around their bedroom.

And I like how you tied in the eyes. I never would have thought that would be the thing that pulled her in.

You know, you make me want to try a Bleach/Naruto crossover. I've wanted to for some time now...but I'm scared.

So I'll just read your stuff instead. :)

Well done. I love the over all idea of opposites for this one. And I'd never really thought of a UlquiSaku but after reading this I want to read more. I hope that you get more plot bunnies for this couple because I also like your style of writing. Over all great job!

OMG ITS AN ULQUISAKU 3 3 . i really like it in a way its really sad though...

Beautiful! I love it!

update soon!

I love it! This little story is amazing, and so are you! Keep on-keepin' on!

best regards-

~TRCSS