this is really good,i really enjoyed it

If it took two days for Dean to notice Sam's wrist, then Big Brother was bad off, not even remembering Sam snuggling.

I Love how Worried and Desperate Sam was when he was in that situation and keep thinking of Dean's sickness and loneliness...

I Love it !

The luck of the Winchesters... a robbery. With someone who was experienced. Dang.

Wondering what Dean meant, with saying Sam, Dad? Missing them, wishing they were there? It was heartbreaking.

Great story!

Simpler times, man... Great story.

Poor boys, they can never catch a break. Dean trying to defend himself when he wakes up all alone, and that monologue...ah, so angsty. Love this piece!

Gosh, everything was going wrong for them in this one. It was supposed to take five minutes and then five hours, three stores, and a hold up later, Sam gets back to find that Dean's reverted to hunting solo mode upon waking to an empty room despite the fact that he's got more blood outside of his body than in.

I enjoyed this...it's nice to have the brotherly love.

Awaa!

Great story. Of all things Sam get into a hold up.

I could feel Sam's desparation in this. And I enjoyed the novelty of the plot.

What an awesome glimpse at Dean finally answering the question "who took care of Dean while Sam was gone". Poor Dean barely conscious in that hotel room alone, and poor Sam feeling so helpless and just wanting to be there for Dean! I love that he realized he was Dean's lifeline. What a great piece, very well written and it sucked me in right from the start. Thank you for sharing!

LD

Aw, very cute. Awesome fic, thanks for posting!

Okay - I'm totally in wuuv with Dean falling asleep while he was talking. I loved the predicament you placed Sam in for this fic - what a great conundrum. Sam's clear priorities too - getting free himself free, helping one person, and then bolting. Made perfect sense. And bloody Dean - thank you! You knew I was looking for a fix of that, and here it is.

Lovely!

Phoebe

This was so good! I loved how rational Sam was, being the big brother, and getting out of there and back to Dean ASAP, and then figuring out what Dean needed (physical contact) and giving it to him. Great job!