when do they fight luke again

Okay, I totally got freaked out when you said there was an eye randomly there. I thought you meant a real eyeball! Good recovery, though. Saving Jade and all. I liked it.

Wow... Very nice opening, there. Well written.

YA! back to review! good job with the keep up of the reviews! love it and keep writing! i'm short on time so i'll write more tommrow!

Sorry for not reviewing for the last chapter!

That was mostly due to me laziness! ~_~

Anyway, the Minklyte part was unexpected! -

The part with Guy thinking it was a dream was lol! XD

I was also surprised that those creatures knew Jade's grandfather.

Oh, I'm tingling at the thought of Jade and the others going to Aselia! :3

Wait till they find out that only people with elven blood can do magic. XP

Btw, are you gonna make them be able to do magic?

How long until they go to Aselia? I'm so excited! o

Also I'm cheering you on for reaching the 10 hits! o

Good luck~!

~S.A.

No! The dreaded cliffie! (sob)

I'm so confused now!

Is this Luke good or bad?

And who is this 'she?'

Why is Auldrant on the path of extinction?

Why am I asking so many questions?

o Oh this getting good~!

~S.A.

Lol. Looks like Anise is jealous that everything is always after Luke but no her!

And another gem? I think I can guess where the other gems.

Also the original blodd of the royal family?

I wonder which family was that.

Trouble in the Zao desert!

Does it have something do with those strange plant?

Also I think this chapter deserves an A! o

Hm... I wonder if some of those gems are in Aselia.

Had Lloyd and the others already completed the World Regenertaion yet?

The floating on water trick was pretty funny! o

And same old Jade. Making others do the heavy lifting.

Too bad that the Albiore was destroyed.

Btw, excellent chapter!

Aurion?

A descendant of Kratos~! Yay! o

Is Treath a brother, grandfather, uncle, or father?

This chapter had a lot of drama with all the storms and the object that Emalia was hiding.

What was it anyway? o_o

I have no clue whatsoever.

Btw, the introduction that talks about how the royal families ruling different world/countries and the shrine was really creative. -

Was the shrine the secret passage that Jade and the others found?

Oh yes, I only have one theory on why Luke had gone bad.

Somehow Mithos became alive again and possessed Luke's body.

Anyway, still a wonderful story so far!

Keep up with the good work~! o

~S.A.

Wonderful chapter~!

Absolutely amazing! o

Is the blue gem a portal to Aselia?

I also have some theories on how Luke gone bad.

Btw I recommend you allowing anonymous reviews.

You'll probably get more reviews that way. -

Love the story so far~! o

You know the plants remind me of the Kharlan Tree that went crazy.

Good luck! -

OH NOES POOR JADE! lol i can totally see Peony being like "now jade you are my best frined and man servent" but as soon he get is memmory back he would kick his butt! XD your doing really good with your up dateing keep it up!

Cool can't wait to see what happens next XD! Keep writing!