Beautiful! I really enoyed reading your story :)
Thank you for writing it.

Love the last line...Absolute genius!

A great story. Very good.

Very beautiful,specially the beginning and the piece with Leia

Please update "This Kiss"

I liked the ending... green for Mara Jade's eyes.

dreamed of green. heheh. green wouldn't be mara's eyes by any chance now would it?

seriously, though, i think you should continue it. its just a little bit abstract in the end, and those people that don't remember mara and her eyes might not know. besiedes, i really love the whole Luke and Mara thingy, its great.

this songfic is the first i ever read, and i luv the song and i luv the story. i just luv it. hehe.

Callista is a bitch. cow.

plz add a little more, bring mara into it again and like, i dunno, end it with Luke and Mara having a drink, and Luke smiling and then the end. or something. plz plz plz plz!

oh well, even if you don't i luv it anyway. write more.. expecially more luke and mara!

thanx for letting me blather on...

Neonlights. _

Wow! I really liked that, it was a nice fic. I thought when I saw that it was from different characters points of view that it would be confusing in regards of figuring out who was who, but you managed it well. You chose a nice song as well, very fitting.

I loved it.

are you going to continue this? you should, it's really good!

I enjoyed your story. _ You made good connections between the song and the Star Wars plot. Keep writing!

~ Jelp

YAY! I like L/M (even if it is only hinted at in the last line). Die Callista. You're really a great writer. Although I am such a fan of L/M, I have to say that this was my fav line: "Not even the Rogues know about it.”

“…wow. I thought they bribed the Bureau of Small Businesses to tell them whenever a new bar opened.” “Actually, they do." ROTFLMAO!

I don't really read a lot of song-based fics but I'm glad I caught this one. It was nicely done, very different from the ones I see. I also think your characterizations were right. When it comes to angry Luke, I've only seen a few works depict him the way I think he would react.