heartbreaking but so beautiful! loved it!

Once again, A masterpiece!

I will always hate Uhura

Ohhhh, Thank you (sob sob) for not killing him! I loved the story and how Kirk didn't want to tell Spock of his illness, I can understand that. I mean who would deliberate want to hurt the one whom is dearest to once heart! It was heartbreaking and so enjoyable :)

Wow, that was powerful stuff. I'm in such envy of someone who can make a simple theme complex, powerful and riveting, and make 17 good chapters that a reader cannot put down. That is real writing talent, and I hope you use it well as it's rare.

Good ending to a kinda depressing story.

This was a well written story. No need to apologize. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your work as a writer myself I know this can be very difficult

SO amazing. I cried like a baby through the last two chapters. The first because it was so sad and the second because it was so happy. Just so you know I can't remember the last time I honestly just cried so that is a HUGE complement to your writing.

Always!

thank you so much for writing this, its beautiful and you are sooooooooooooo good *tears*

I love and hate your story at the same time. I couldn't stop reading it and a tear was shed at the end.

This was a wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it very much. :)

Good job! I'm not sure that i like jim surviving, lol.

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Oh my god, I'm sitting here trying not to curl up in a ball and bawl (that would probably scare the hell out of my parents). How you write such emotion into these chapters I'll never know. Like seriously, I don't know how to keep my eyes from tearing up every time I read this (this is my 7th time). All I have to do is just *think* about this story and I feel the tears well up in my eyes. Oh my lord, breathe. Your writing is wrecking havoc on me right now, please, keep it up.