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Annoyed at Plot chapter 13 . 1/19/2015 It feels a bit like Connie is letting all of this happen to her with out a fight, i know she says she hates being female. That being said the fact that she was male for half a century should have her doing something, taking action not just letting his mother, brothers, and everyone else walk all over him/her. I think if it was me it would end up at the point where I would run away if they were going to be that over bearing. I also would not have allowed them to dictate to me what activities I would be able to do. If I was him I would have had Yozak alter his old uniforms and go right back to the military (gender be damned). And if they didn't like it they could try fighting him. He wasn't the lion of luttenburg for nothing. I will say that this plot is really interesting and I hope to see what happens next. |
SarcasticBitch chapter 13 . 10/6/2014 Sure you'll get the next chapter out soon! It been almost a year if not more woman! |
I'm-your-evitwin chapter 13 . 6/4/2014 You still don't have the next chapter I check every single day |
Yoru Hana1 chapter 13 . 6/9/2013 Every time you update this I get more and more disgusted with Conrart's family. |
Princess Sin chapter 13 . 6/9/2013 this was quite the hilarious chapter. poor Conrad or should I say connie what a horrible situation she is in. I mean no one is even taking her feelings into it. you would think her mother would listen to her but I guess you can't expect anything from her. I mean this is the woman that is dressing her daughter up to look like a whore. you should have let Conrad speak her mind about asking how much for her service. maybe it would have snapped Cecilia out of her stupidity. and who would have thought anissia would be such hypocrite. women's right. yeah right only if its her own rights is she willing to fight for any other woman is on her own. well I am so looking forward to the next chapter. |
angel chapter 12 . 9/13/2012 Lol! Poor conrad, yozak, and anyone who makes conrad mad! I hope u continue this! ITS SOOOO FUNNY! Btw just to make sure this story is it a yozcon story airing?! |
Koko chapter 12 . 4/16/2012 Please!Please!Please! Update A.S.A.P. I can't wait to know what is going to happen next! I like this story a lot and I read all 12 chapters at a stretch! Yozak/Conrart scenes are really well written;) It would be nice if Connie and Gwendal have a proper confrontation...his reasons for forcing Conrart to become Victoria isn't clear yet... In chapter 10 Gwendal thinks - 'Still the person he actually wanted to bid had yet to do so and it irked him' I wonder who this person could be...is it Yozak? I'm not sure so pleeeeeeeeease update SOON! And also pleeeeeeeeease let Conrart and Yozak have a happy ending *puppy dog look* |
jenbeach chapter 12 . 4/4/2012 thank-you for all your hard work on this, really great to see a new chapter! I do always wonder and wait for Gunter to do something about all this, it's an odd time for Connies teacher and mentor to bow out completely. And if it's not proper for him to offer guidance to a young lady, it must be missed. Though he has a daughter of his own so I can't imagine he wouldn't know whats needed and he certainly understands the former Queen isen't the best role model for her sons/daughter all the time. Also, where are Gisela and Annissina in this? I would have thought they'd be all over Connie by now, especially Gisela since they're around the same age and were both friends with Julia growing up. They're strong women who should be there to help their friend, not just Yozak all the time. |
banshee196 chapter 12 . 4/3/2012 Poor Connie. And Murata knows everything. :) Glad to see a new chapter and looking forward to more. |
D-Chan chapter 11 . 3/16/2012 It is a really beautiful story. Look Wolf so protective of his sister. so cute. I hope to see the new chapter soon. |
cz chapter 6 . 1/28/2012 If Conrad self-identifies as male, it would be proper to refer to him as ‘he’. |
banshee196 chapter 11 . 9/13/2011 Wolfram's quick turnaround from jerk to brother wanting to protect his sister from Yozak was funny. Looks like you're getting more time to write; I'm glad since I enjoy your stories. |
StandingOnTheRooftops chapter 10 . 5/17/2011 I never thought I'd find a female Conrart funny and interesting, but this fic is pretty awesome! |
Mewknight chapter 3 . 4/2/2011 Wolfram, why couldn't you go to straight to Anissana than to Gwendal or Yuri? XD |
LittleOne94 chapter 10 . 11/2/2010 really starting to hate Gwendal and lady Celie! can you kill them? l hate what there doing to Conrad! |