I love long stories.

Thank You,
G. Smith

I love the authenticity of the story and how it represents Gale. I wish you continued, but it seems like you've been gone for a while. Nevertheless, great story!

I think Madge is pretty rebellious and their conversations with Gale would be interesting to follow. So, here's my opinion, and I really like the story.

Loved it! You did a great job with the story!

Great chapter didn't think it was long at all!

this is an awesome story.

awesome story. i love Gale!

just saying madge dies in the bombing so she could do to much as a rebel? and so far your storys great

Please write a sequel! :D

Nicely finished.

If this was the end, it needs to have its status changed to complete

Yeah, the previous chapter was a hard act to follow, but this one was pretty good too

A brilliantly written chapter, emotive and emotional

You're writing the story about the hot-headed leder of a rebellion.

1 He's allowed an informer to live, when he could have killed him without being suspected before the two became directly involved with each other.

2 He let him live when he attacked him

3 He's now threatened Gale's family, who he CANNOT protect except by killing him and he STILL does nothing.

This is not in character Gale, it is not remotely like someone who rebels would follow. If you're writing about a rebel leader, please do some research onto how rebel leaders behave. There are enough lessons from history on this. Try researching things like the French Resistance.

Is he going to wait for Rory to be killed before he does anything? So far he's all mouth and he's playing into the Capitol's hands.

If you'd studied anything about resistance in occupied territories you'd know that a confessed informer would have been quietly killed before he could do any damage OR fed a lot of lies. There is NO WAY that Gale can let him get away with this and remain credible.

In addition, it is almost certain that an attempt would have been made on Thread's life just as happened in occupied Europe.

it'll be too late for this input, but I'll answer you anyway

re Madge and incentive to rebel. The WAY she gave Katniss the Mockingjay pin so urgently makes me think she knew what it meant or would mean. I don't think she needs much of an incentive to rebel