like the story so the summers kids are twin nice love the humor

this was really really awesome! there is just so much goodness and fantastic moments that i do no think i can pick out everything that is great in it! i am so so glad that you finally uploaded this chapter!

you are amazing and i hope that someday in the future we will get chapter 4 or any other kind of xmen fic from you... maybe sarge since you did create it! lol

That was so much fun! I love the X-Mansion chaos! And poor Betsy, lol. You do a good job of writing her.

Lorna kind of fits as a surfer-wouldn't have thought of it myself, though. She's one of my favorites characters, and I never see her in Evo stories, so this was fantastic. Especially seeing her reactions to meeting the X-Men.

Yay, Domino gets a mention! Cable and Rachel were great too.

I like how much you use italics. It reminds me of reading the comic books.

I was kind of curious about who had Jason Mraz stuck in their head in chapters 1 and 2, if you still have your list.

Lovely story. I can't wait to see how it turns out. Take your time, though; I know how that is. :)

Nice story, just two comments:

Emma Frost can’t use her telepathy while in her diamond form; when she is like that she can’t feel anything, actually, she’s emotionless (more than usual) and even her skin gets a dumb feeling.

Roberto is Brazilian. He spoke Spanish in you fic, and in Brazil the language is Portuguese. You should have tried “Meu Deus!” instead of “dios mio”.

Those are just things that comic book readers would catch, but nothing very serious. ;D

Anyway, nice story.

I hadnt realized u were the author, when i did I wasnt surprised that Ilike it so much. Oh n u should pm me that list :) please & thank you

Absolutly hilarious chapter. Im really engaged. The writing is rather good as well, so ur doing great. Interested in seeing where the Jean and Scott thing goes as well keep up the good work :)
K.G.

This is hilarious! I loved 'Just Thursday' and I'm so glad you're continuing it with this.

I really hope you update soon!

awesome chapter. can't wait for the next one.

Let me say again that I absolutely ADORE your sense of humor.

As for the story, I'm not sure where I stand on it; it could use a good beta reading to get some of the kinks out, but you have a lot of originality here. It's good to see some lesser-used characters making appearances, too.

This is wildly entertaining, and I'll be watching for more. And please, LOTS more Laura.

This is very amusing. :)

This is a lot of fun, so far. Haven't figured out how your italics work, all the time yet, but the story itself is great.

kiragecko

loved it and cant wiat the next chapter!

Call me deathly curious, I want to know whose heads Betsy can't help but sneeze into. "Barbie", huh? Definitely fits. Alex's proposal was very funny and very stupid, if my girlfriend was X-23 I wouldn't even speak to another female. CRACK. M...

"I'm sober!" Super-geniuses shouldn't drink and what is it with the abusive girlfriends and mutants? So are we going to see some Sentinels? Pink one? I'm guessing Nimrod, but you don't have to confirm.

There were some periods missing halfway through the fic I could see, not a big problem. Otherwise it was a solid read, great characterization as always.

This whole story is epic!

You have so many plot lines and characters, yet it is so amazingly amazing and unconfusing! Great great great job!

Of course you are waiting for me to say 'gah alex and laura- so cute! Lorna can go jump off a cliff for all i care!'' and i do think that, but i am also fascinated by this new couple; Sage and Forge. They are soo cute and funny! ''I'M SOBER. I'M SOBER. I'M SOBER!'' LOL. So funny!

And when Tessa stops to ask if Lorna is over 18-that was priceless!

I wish you could write 20 chapters of this great x-men fic!

I'd love the list of betsy's tk sneezes, i have a few guesses, but i'd love to see if i'm right! :D

I read through both your Friday introduction story and this one in a single sitting, and found myself laughing so hard I thought I would need stitches! You've got a wonderful gift for "crazy, but still have a plot" type stories. I'm sincerely looking forward to anything more you have for your "X-Men: Devolution" universe!