Last review I forgot to mention WHITE TIGERS! Ah, *facepalms* I feel so stupid!
Sincerely,
A VERY Pissed Off And Feeling So Dumb That She Could Rip Out Her Hair In Her Sleep, Shadow

That was exceptionally written, if not a little morbid.
I found it rather enjoyable, but, then again, I always find torture and abuse fanfics entertaining.
Thank you for writing this story and posting it so us readers can curb our Sadism (Did I spell that right?.?.)
Nevertheless, us readers are all truly grateful for your amazing writing skills, and I have to say, I'm a little jelous.
Seriously, I want to steal your innocence (your writing skill) and lock it up in a box, so I can keep it for myself forever.
Sincerely,
A Shadow

Best part of story Toma tryna to play nonchalant while playing cards
That was awesome, just, all serious love dove then, bam, cards.

really great story…love the ending but i wish there was a little more to it3 ….thank you

great so far… i love it i hope Allen and Kanda get togthere before the end (still on chapter 2 )…but great work the plot of the story is amazing and really inquiring….. thanks for the story hope it has a great ending 3 3 :) :)

I respect your last comment because I totally agree with you!
Write a story about naruto as the bottom please!

If I were Allen I'd probably killed myself all ready

Me like :) I do wish you would have continued, but I understand getting bored with a story. I have at least a dozen half-written books under my bed right now Lolz oh, and white tiger :)

I like this... A LOT! This is my second or third time reading it. Good job :{)

It was great also before I post this review here are some flames to keep you warm :)

Great fanfic. I feel bad for Allen. But YAY! Happy ending! D

Kanda be more grateful she made Allen give you head in a very erotic manner

save Allen dammit

I feel scared for Allen! :( You are from Ohio...? I live there! O_o ... what if we know each other!

I wished you would continue, the story was amazing and the ending turned out rushed which is a bad thing! you left soooo many questions un-answered, and I'm kept wondering but if this is what the author chooses then this is what will happen since this is your story. However, I am not lying when I said that this is an amazing and incredible story...