In best tradition of this site, all I can say is, "OMG, moar, plz!"

Seriously, this is one of the best and most intriguing starts on the various topics inherent in the fandom/trope (and the characters involved) that I've seen. Heck, except for the military/law enforcement aspect, not even the fandom really matters - I could almost randomly switch character names and see it working just as well. So, great job!

I know it's been literally years that you've worked on this, so chances are more than slim (if not non-existent), but I'll say it regardless: "Update soon, can't wait!"

like many, I have only recently found this story. it is sad that this story is indeed unfinished and do hope you are fine. Maybe just needed a break from writing? That is okay, can happen
still, hope you will finish this story one day

Hey McStories, I just found out your NCIS stories, loved them but was deceived to find this one unfinished and untouched for seven years. Your pen name made me think that you write mostly McGee centered NCIS fanfics which is not the case either. I hope that you're all right, just please please update this story pretty soon. I wonder if you had already planned the plot and the ending. Detective Person is a homophobe bastard but he's also a prejudiced asshole ! One may not agree with the lifestyle but no one has the right to misjudge and mock people because of their preferences. Tony didn't act better, if you ask me. I remember him spreading rumors about McGee's sexuality-even without knowing him really-and mocking him for using lotions and no one telling him to stop on the show all those seasons. He acted like a damn homophobe even if he said that he's not one. Abby is my second unfavorite character. She's a spoiled egoistic bitch who used McGee's feelings and put him down every occasion she had. She isn't acting better here either. Instead of trying to help Tim she ignores his pain, grief and scolds him for not telling her everything? Like always she's only thinking of herself, you're portraying her as she really is in the show. Even if the scenarists started to show her in a more mature way and a real friend towards McGee in the last few seasons, it doesn't make us forget the shitty was she treated Tim for more than 10 seasons. I don't regret her departure from the show, apparently it was long overdue. Cheers, and I hope you'll be able to update soon !

I hope that everything is alright with you, and that everything is going well. This story is pretty amazing. I don't really have words that can be explained on this piece that you have created. I always had the story downloaded, but I never commented- and now I am to see if you will reply (Wishful thinking 'sigh'). This is an amazing story with an OMC within the story line even though he is dead. Not many individuals that write within the NCIS Fanfics have ever written an OMC with Tim, and if it's not OMC, its with Kurt.

I hope that you haven't given up on the story because I am 100% ready for another chapter to see what will occur. Just wondering, is Tony really homophobic about Tim having a boyfriend, or is he just in shock that Tim is what a man. Who knows? Those that are still infatuated with this story will only figure it out come the next chapter.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaahh! I freaking love it!

Please tell me you are not done with this story. It's really good. I want to see how it ends.

Want to read this but can't get started on something that hasn't had an update in almost 6 years. Sorry.

Gasp! I can't believe that's all! Please, please, *please* finish the story! This has incredible potential.

“I don't care if this Marine was sleeping with a woman, a man, a farm animal or a piece of fruit. You will show him the respect he's earned or you will get the hell out of his home.”

You made me want to high five Gibbs for this. (And knee Person in the crotch.)

I hope you will continue this story. I like the way Gibbs is supporting Tim by being gentle, yet following the case professionally, doing the investigation. I thought his treatment of Persons was well-written.I was afraid Tim had been hurt by the cops. I really want to know what police were doing during the three hour delay.

Interesting story start. I am interested in seeing where it goes and hope you plan on continuing it soon. ~Stacey DC

I really love the story u should keep on keep on going with the story in my opinion...please update soon...

please finish this story

Spectacular! More please!

Have you discontinued this?