Reviews for Victims of Fate
14athomas chapter 11 . 4/11/2013
I know you haven't updated in a while and have probably forgotten the plotline, but can you continue the story?
Dodal chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
You'll never gonna finnish this, are you?
douglas.dalini chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
Dude, are you going to continue or what? I mean, this story is freakin awesome, and i would hate if it was gone to waste
Forsaken By All chapter 11 . 10/27/2011
Hello, I have read you're FF and, in not only mine but also many other people's opinion, this story is one of the greatest one's out there. The are no errors, misspells, or missing quotation marks. I've read what happened on you're DA page and I'm orry for you're loss, just know that we, the fans, will always be here for you. Be it in writer's block or just plain trouble. Keep up the epic work...

Forsaken By All
Padfootkicksbutt chapter 11 . 10/12/2011
i LOVE this story idea! and can't wait for murtagh's name to change ;) also, the way it is written really draws the reader in, even when they know that they really should be sleeping ;P
Separate Entity chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Ouch! Painful!
PanthersFan14 chapter 11 . 10/5/2009
Great chapter! Galbatorix is so evil - taking pleasure in Murtagh's pain. Aww.. I hope Murtagh finds some way around the oaths, although I couldn't see any.
Spottedstar106 chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
Please update soon! Is Eragon and Saphira gonna show up soon? Not that I care, or anything. Murtagh's all I need! XD

Spottedstar106
Pendragon.P a s s i o n chapter 11 . 9/27/2009
thnxX for letting us know u havent forgotten bout this.. Im sorry bout ur loss, truly I am..

hope u feel better soon!

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StarShine chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
This is REALLy good! Keep writing!
PanthersFan14 chapter 10 . 9/25/2009
Great chapter! Poor Murtagh! Having to choose to never see Moira again (well, if the king will let him)... That would be awful!
Magnira chapter 10 . 9/25/2009
you have stop writing?

this not good. Please you keep writing. very good story.
Pendragon.P a s s i o n chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Awsumm..

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iPrae chapter 10 . 9/18/2009
Wow wow wow! This is great! I love how you capture Murtagh's and Thorn's thoughs and feelings!

Update soon before I suffer from withdraws :)
Pendragon.P a s s i o n chapter 10 . 9/17/2009
hey..I just found thid today nd lemme just say thats its totally awsumm..

I absolutely lov it!

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