Reviews for Pieces
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Love it! Evil penny. Nice. Great concept.
JustDanny chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Love it!
Mint Pearl Voice chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Oh, woah, this is incredible! The last one is just chilling. :)
Steampoweredgal chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I love how each possibility gets darker and darker. Very lovely, all around
Eliza Aacher chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Reading this was painful in a good way.

(btw, I really liked how you separated each segment with 'She falls for him in pieces')
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Wow. Dark, but good! I like it alot.

And a teensy part of me (which is being rebuked by the rest) really wishes this had happened in the original.
Daniel Wesley Rydell chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Woah. That's really nifty. I'm impressed by this idea.
Emmarrrrr chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I... really want more of that last universe right there. So bad.

This was really beautiful. I also loved the second one, where she KNOWS.

But yes. More of the last one, please.
Tryptophan36 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
The possibilities are positively tantalizing. kudos.
Shu of the Wind chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
A very interesting idea of what can happen in alternate universes...I wish so badly that it happened in the original.

Nicely written. I like the little twists on the original story, and the repeating line, "She falls for him in pieces." Please, continue with Dr. Horrible stories!
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I loved the style of this. Its well written. I also like the idea of Penny being evil. Not hurting anyone, but evil. Nice.
Out of Lullabies chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Really wonderful, and definitely the way things should have been. :) Well done.
RuikaRose chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Wow...incredible.

This is just really together, really touching and really well done.

I'm so glad you wrote this.
theladyisatiger chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
This is really sweet. Love to see Penny stand up for herself.