I'm with eagle dreamer, very disturbing, but good. I'm shook

Wow! Incredible concept! Well done : )

Who. Dense, dark, a bit depressing and a mindwarp.

dont take this the wrong way but this story was disturbing

This left me feeling cold.

Woah. O.O

Wow, that was beautiful and terrifying at the same time

This is really, really good. However, it could probably be even better – more tied together and flowing better – if you got rid of the line breaks. Since you already have so many POV changes, you might as well go for 3rd person omniscient, and make that work again. With the line breaks I feel we loose some of the potency of the story as it becomes more fractured.

But seriously. Wow.

I cried. T.T

Holy fiddlesticks this is
really disturbing and also seems like an entirely plausible AU for "danny's actually a ghost" and /HOLY SHIT/ I don't even have words
THIS IS SO GOOD okay. suspense and disbelief and horror done beautifully well and evoked perfectly and /HOLY SHIT/
This is great okay, I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews or something. It was a great read, I loved it.

Haunting, beautifully presented and an ideal explanation to Danny's predicament. Realistically, there is no way a human could withstand the level of electricity that he endured. It's inspired and interesting. A true testament to DP fandom and impressive piece of work.

A ghost who experienced a sudden death will never admit their own unless they saw their own corpse. And I guess depending on their own psyche, one would either lose their mind, ignore it or just concede defeat.

*I guess the same thing would happen to me, I would constantly try to convince myself that an event never happened, until the proof stared at me right in the eye.

It's so beautiful! It's like it could actually be the last episode!

Whaaaaaaat... O-O Wow...that could've gone on longer...and the end could've been better. Actually, it seems a bit rushed, like you didn't know how it should end; you could cut off the last part and create a whole, long story of awesomeness! And...I kind of wish you would; this is WOW, and...WOW. I don't know what other word to use. :U

Omg this story was so dark and tragic but I loved it at the same time! Can you write a sequel to this after they found out and everyone's reactions? That would be great.