too awesome.

cool i just love this story it turned out great

HeeHee, Linda dn North are funny!

damn. wish i had been there.

Aw, how sweet! And yes you'd do really in the comedy genre. You literally had me loling. ~Silver

Okay, I take offense to your comment yesterday at the library. I mean, this is the story where you were all, "It's a parody!" and such and such, right? And you know what, my comment was perfectly fine. Because this story, parody or not, could use some work. Every story could. And the fact that you're not willing to accept my helpful critisism (which was not much for this story) tells me that its a damn good thing I'm not beta reading for you. And for the record, I never said I was beta reading your red story. All I wanted to do was read it. READ IT. As in, READ ONLY. *cough* Yes, I'm frustrated. You snapped at me a little too much yesterday.

In my defense, this story is just that, a story. The fact that you got angry yesterday about a simple comment I made MONTHS ago. . . Not cool. At all. And this is supposed to be a review, but I realize now its not. Tough luck.

Hey hey hey! Would ya look at that. You used my title. Hahah! Yeah, it was a joke, by the way...

At any rate! Gwah... I shall take this pairing home and name it squishy. I think I gave you some feedback when I read it on paper... Like I said before, good job at remembering what characters you have in the scene! (I do this in fiction at lot, that is, introducing three people and then having two talk and forgetting the third exists. So rock on!)

Also... Develop North! I want to know more about her! I know right now she's just a plot device, but what is she ranked? How does she fit into Wammy's House? What are her skills? What kind of ice-cream does she like for Pete's sake! I want to know!

aha, your such a dork. It makes me lol

I have to comment on your usage of the f-word. It was perfect. Sometimes fan-fics can lose sight of the original characters; however, the "I love you Mello; I f*ing love you" made Matt just leap off the page for me. I could see that cocky grin he has in the anime (when he's getting out of the car)-the perfect look to lighten the "declaring my love for a dude" moment!

Now...would you please write chapter 6-the suspense is almost bad enough to make me read the manga for my Mello/Matt fix! Mind you, I said almost-bet you can guess who I am ;).

Yay! I like your story. It's really cute. Keep up the good work

HAHA! That was amazing and hilarious! It had me giggling the whole time. xD

Well... I'm glad North isn't with anyone... I was going to have to kill you if she was. But first I would kidnap all your gay friends and molest them in front of you, then make you drink chocolate bacon slushies, Then read my diaries to you, then kill you with a tazer and an eggplant.

It was a great story!

Gosh, this kinda cracks me up. I mean, its so hilariously flirty! I love it! And you have great grammar, by the way. Though I must say that perhaps you ought to try making it a little less corny and a little more real, passionate, yada yada. Of course, I enjoy your cutesy writing style. XD Yays!

Ah, another story! I love oneshots, and this one was simply adorable! It was funny, too, since I can bet money that many fangirls would do just the same in real life with Mello and Matt.

As always, excellent writing! xD

Cute~

So,who's on top?

Great fic,write more!