Thanks for the very good read a little sad

Beautiful

The mix of despair, rage, grief, love and hope running between Lisbon and Jane in this fic is skillfully written and lovely to read.

That was a sweet story!

Wow! that is incredible, undoubtibly the best peice of writning I have read in a long time! will you do any more chapters? I sincerly hope so !

aw i nearly cried! write a sequel and make it happier! i mean i loved it to pieces and everything, but so sad! i seriously nearly cried! and that one quote from Halo at the end... wow. great job!

Rose

Beautifully written story! Enjoyed reading it :) Hope there'll be more!

Oh sad. :sniffles: There's a hint of hope, but so much of it is sad.

Thanks for writing.

Well done! You can really see how broken Jane is in this story.

I think this is a beautiful story you wrote. How they deal with the aftereffects of the shooting - that's what's been missing in this episode. And your version is something that could have very well happened. IMO you portrayed Lisbon and Jane pretty good. The inner conflicts both characters have, the way they try to deal with their emotions - well written, great job!

I thought that that was absolutely fantastic, so real ! I can imagine that is exactly the way things would have planned out and you got they're characters spot on. You also wrote Jane's vulnerbility really well, something that I know I would find really hard to do ! Particularly loved the way you ended it with Lisbon's hope for Jane and the future.

I thought that that was absolutely fantastic, so real ! I can imagine that is exactly the way things would have planned out and you got they're characters spot on. You also wrote Jane's vulnerbility really well, something that I know I would find really hard to do ! Particularly loved the way you ended it with Lisbon's hope for Jane and the future.