can't wait to read the rest...

:) love it

Is this story discontinued? Are you dead? Because I really love this story and would be so happy if you continued it.

This story has so much potential. It's fast-paced and suspenseful. You use descriptive, vivid language (i.e. when Dan almost gets killed by the train). The characters are IC and I really like how you incorporate Ian/Amy romance into the story. I know this story hasn't been updated in over a year, but I really hope you won't abandon it.

Please write more! Your stories are so good and I feel like they could have actually happened othe book! PLEASE! Thank you!

Come on! Can you update already? *pleads

I'm really wondering when you'll be updating ALL of your stories. Also, I was wondering if you could have a line break whenever the story's going to change perspectives. It would be easier to make sense if there was a line break there. That's all really. Please update!

I'm so glad you decided to continue with this! You've really gotten the voice from the 39 Clues series down, and I loved the hint of Ian/Amy in this chapter.

Nice. PLEASE UPDATE!

PLEASE UPDATE! ah, its a cliffe... well when im reading this the writing and the story sound sooo similar to the actual books :D wow, your such a good writer, which is why im telling you to keep writing!dont ever stop :D but update soon even if it hasnt been in 2 months..

Oh my gosh dude u have a talent! When i was reading this it felt like i was really reading one of the books! This is amazing! Ur talent is amazing! U should seriously consider a career in wiriting when its time! Keep writing!

Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! I'm going to die wondering where they're going! Update soon please!

please update faster this time!

I know that its almost been 2 years since you last updated...but I'm still hoping for an update...

good story, not cheesy, which is a good thing.