"First it was Jimmy..." The ending was down right great! Though when Anne kissed Johnny I fell out of my chair.

One thing:

"Tell me I'm a good boy."

...You know, I nearly got chills from that.

And wow, she kissed Johnny. You've endowed him with some cast iron resolve, if he didn't go for her eyeballs right then and there. Don't ask me why, but I actually liked that moment.

Okay, so...

the bit where you were discribing Anne's death in gratuitous detail was actually really awesome. I rather feel like I'm falling for a practical joke, but what can I say? The makeup? pure genious. Very Johnny.

And I think you've successfully intimidated -and possibly belittled- the reader, which is exactly what Jhonen loves to do. So, sucess!

I wasn't quite sure what to think when Johnny broke into the narration-I think you may have slipped into meta-land-but on the other hand, it was pretty funny and it did make you think. Though, I wouldn't have mentioned myself as the author.

Lovely ending moral. "First Jimmy..."

So, thumbs up. :D

...weird.

But I think I like it.

Ah, and insanity is indeed contagious.