This wss an amazing story, I really loved the whole idea, especially the thought of sam saving the day.:)

HEEEEEE! FLUFF MOMENTS! Gotta love them!

this was really good

Friendship through life and death situations-the best kind! lol

I really loved this fanfiction! A really one of a kind story! My heart was pounding so loud as I was reading this! I kept thinking that Sam was going to get shot; I was so scared for him! Great fic!

Kate S.

This is a great story.

I really liked this one, well aside from the subject matter. Lennox and Ironhide were interesting and Bee's worry was good. You covered a heck of a lot of bases in regards to getting out of the school...oh and the interaction between Trent and Sam was brill! You didnt have them immediately getting along or anything.

My main issue with this? The ending. It was far too quick and short and the last 3 paragraphs were really cheesy. And I mean really really cheesy...pass me a bucket kind. To be honest the end spoilt it. Sorry, but thats just me.

Awesome story! I absolutely loved it!

Wow, this is so far an intense story and I guess very fitting with the sad fact that such shootings already happened a lot in the past. I can barely imagine how frustrating it must be for Lennox and the Autobots to just sit back and wait while others do the work (or don't do anything).

So far there is only one thing I like to point out. This chapter, you started it in a third person's point of view and suddenly you switch it to Lennox point of view in 'I' form. Besides the fact that it is not recommendable to switch the way of storytelling especially in one chapter, it was also very confusing, because first I didn't know if it was suddenly Lennox's point of view or Ironhide's. I might consider to avoid doing that again and maybe correct it here.

But besides that one thing the story was well done so far and I am looking forward to now go and read the final chapter.

Greetings

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\

This is such a great ending to such a great story! At least the bad guys will get what they deserve now. Wonder if Trent would be any better in the coming school year..

Thanks for writing!

Aw, yay! Happy ending *sniffles*

Ops, Didn't see this was The last chapter. What a fantastic ending, loved it. Got a kick out of Sam refusing to get out of Bee so Ratchet could do his scan. LOL. Loved this whole story, great job.

Yea, another chapter. Great job. But complete? Aw.

great ending!

Nice.